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Fic: Reunion

Feb 26, 2009 11:11

Title: Reunion
Pairing: Fernando Torres/Sergio Ramos, Daniel Agger/Fernando Torres
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: True in the land of imagination only.
Summary: It’s after the first leg of the Real Madrid-Liverpool clash and Sergio sneaks into Fernando’s room with unexpected (angsty) results
Feedback: Would be greatly appreciated! Good/bad, either is ( Read more... )

daniel agger, sergio ramos, post-match, fernando torres, fic

Comments 29

jumping_down February 27 2009, 04:44:09 UTC

Great fic. I love how you portrayed them both so maturely and so realistically and so differently from the usual characters. Like, it's not Fernando = dork, Sergio = slut, Dan = miserable git. I love the gray areas in between them and how you played it out. ♥

ombu_tree February 28 2009, 01:23:40 UTC

Thank you so much for your feedback. I'm really, really flattered that you liked my portrayal of them =). I can see where people are coming from with the typical personas, but there is so much more to them that just that, isn't there? I mean, Fernando's interviews and on/off pitch behaviour is just so mature and level-headed, Sergio's media coverage won't help his rep as being a slut but he can't be all shallow! and Dan, well, Dan..suffice to say that there is nothing that Dan can't be in my head =P.

I'm glad that you liked them because I was actually quite scared that people wouldn't like this characterisation. =) So doubly thank you =D =D

ringhelediel February 27 2009, 15:32:13 UTC

eeeehh i think Serg's bein such a betch! and poor Daggs...thank god they didnt end up torturing the poor lad tho..

ombu_tree February 28 2009, 01:24:59 UTC

Awww, Sergio did let up afterwards. It's just the jealousy talking, poor baby. =)
I take it you're more a Dan/Nando fan than a Sernando one? XD

Thanks for reading and commenting =)
(but yes, Poor Danny - I hope with the Rick Parry is leaving stuff, his contract issues will be fixed asap.)

ringhelediel February 28 2009, 05:36:41 UTC

i has never been a sSernando fan!! im not into bestiality XDXDXDXD!!

yeah man..come on Daggsy! he's been getting injured and shite...

ombu_tree March 1 2009, 03:59:14 UTC

im not into bestiality
Are you implying something about Sergio? XD.
I like Sernando, they are so close it's lovely. But I dont have a good grasp on Ramos yet, and I do love Danny =P.
haha

ibythetide February 28 2009, 16:13:24 UTC

i really like how this plays out. fernando has always kind of struck me as a decent person, you know? like he has a solid core to do right by himself and i think it would extend to others. no matter how hot it could have been, the chances of it hurting danny were to great and i think he's a woobie.

but i will second guess sergio's (because ah luv him and the music only he can hear) and say that maybe he was motivated by not only jealous, but the image of a sweatsoaked night in liverpool between the three of him.

ombu_tree March 1 2009, 04:01:40 UTC

Thanks for your comment and all that feedback! I agree, Fernando seems a nice guy, with good moral sense (even if he can be a bit silly and dorky especially when drunk) but overall, he seems like he's very considerate.
p.s. What's a 'woobie'?

And Sergio, well. hahaha. Perhaps you're right. XD. That has crossed my mind for the potential fic for the 2nd leg but we'll see. XD.

ibythetide March 1 2009, 23:30:35 UTC

i'm about to tell you what a woobie is. please respect me afterwards as my geekery knows no bounds.

in my memories "woobie" is the name of barbara gorden (batgirl)'s teddy bear in batman: the animated series (cartoon from the early to mid 1990s). it was given to her and i believed named by her father.

*blush!!!*

so nando is teddy bear.

That has crossed my mind for the potential fic for the 2nd leg but we'll see

*is so totally hopeful!!*

ombu_tree March 2 2009, 04:47:51 UTC

Oh! I see, Nando is a teddy? ^_^
That's not geeky! Don't worry. I have my fair share of geekery XD. I wasn't much of a cartoon/comics fan but back in my childhood, I was an anime fan! XD. Well, I still do like anime but just don't have the energy to keep up with the "new" stuff. So I know like, the 80s and 90s anime XD. hehehe. [they were good, too!]

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casi_casi May 21 2009, 13:22:48 UTC

I see you've posted the sequel, and I realised that I hadn't even read this yet! So here I am. Finally. :)

I know it's been written before, but I find the whole Sernando vs. Dando thing quite fascinating. I think it's fair enough that Fernando would fool around after leaving Sergio behind. After all, these slashy footballers don't bind themselves to each other! And so I like that you've tackled that in this fic, and shown the difference between fooling around and actually feeling some sort of romantic connection to another footballer. In particular, I really like the reference Fernando made to Sergio's 'girls' and his own Olalla. They're all cheaters anyway.

I love this:
swaying slightly to a tune that only he could hearI'm imagining a toned-down, more Spanish version of Jack Sparrow ( ... )

ombu_tree May 26 2009, 10:09:46 UTC

Hehe, actually that one's not the sequel...it's just an alternate ending. The sequel (the one after the Liv-Madrid match) is still coming... =S

But thanks for reading this! And for your giant comment =)

Yeah, I agree! I think it's very interesting when football couples have to confront each other. I mean, with so many different pairings that people like, sometimes it's nice to tackle issues like that.

They're all cheaters anyway. I actually really hate the idea of cheating, but I guess just being part of 'slash' is already cheating since most footballers have partners already. *sigh ( ... )