Post Match Fics and Stevie

[ombu_tree]

This is I swear, the last of the Newcastle-Liv Post Match fics

Comments

[cactupuss]

The hat-trick one was sweet. Classic Stevie/Xabi, or more like the way I like them. :)

Oh, I loved Mikey when he played for us. I used to have such a crush on him. Hhaha... But that has nothing to do with your fic.

Loved the breathing Stevie does, 'cause in interviews he sort of does that, doesn't he? Maybe that's just post-match I don't know. I really don't see many interviews at all. :(

Patience. He was always the patient one of the two. Stevie was so impulsive when he was younger; he never practiced the old adage of ‘think before you leap’. There would be no filter between words in his mind and words that came out of his mouth. Michael had loved his spontaneity and learnt to live with the trouble it caused. That's exactly how I would have envisioned Stevie/Mikey in the earlier days (maybe even today too)! Micheal was always so down to Earth and humble, while Stevie is too, he always seems like he intends to reach for the stars whatever the situation. :)

Michael could see Stevie just now. Twisted with guilt because his wonder

[ombu_tree]

Oh, your comments! =)

Thanks for all that! Especially the Stevie/Mikey comments! I've never written Mikey before so it's really really wonderful of you to give me so much feedback on that!

AHhahaah, who didn't have a crush on Michael, he's so classically cute. (and back then, that type of cute was definitely in).

I don't know about the heavy breathing and post-matches. That might have to do with the match, yeah. I just imagined that they're sort of out of words, so they just breathe as they're trying to communicate but failing? (and also a little anxious because of what they had? - as if they shouldn't find talking so difficult but they do, and it makes things awkward?)

Yes! Definitely! Stevie is always puts everything he has into everything! It would have to be big or nothing. =P and Michael just looks like a gentleman so patience is a trait I just see in him.

Seems familiar, almost like nothing's changedYES! Thank you! I love that you always seem to understand what I'm trying to write! =D That's exactly what I wanted to get

[cactupuss]

Oh, no. Now I'm going to have to prove that I actually can read who's who from all the he's (if/when you write it) Haha, but I bet that would be interesting. :)

And I can't stop ranting so you have no choice but to get massive comments all the time. I always have so much to say, hehe.

I love it too, that I seem to understand what you're trying to convey (that sounds awful, but what the hey)

And the heavy breathing thing... I know what you mean, but it just seemed very 'Stevie' though. :)

[ombu_tree]

Oh no? (are you getting scared now!? AHAHHAAHA Don't worry, I'm not trying to "test" you or anything, just it would be very interesting to see if you know! (and also to see if I can write well enough to show who's who without resorting to names!) So, a challenge for us both! =D

[la_geologia]

I looved the Hat Trick one!! ♥
Great little fic :)

[ombu_tree]

Oh, thank you for your comment and compliments =)
I appreciate it!

[maz08]

I loved both of those.
Really lovely.:)

[ombu_tree]

Thanks for reading and commenting! =)

[casi_casi]

Aw, the first one was so sweet. I love thinking of them as their own little mini-team. I was kind of sad that Stevie couldn't take the pen and get his hat-trick, but if anyone else had to take it, I'm glad it was Xabi.

And the second one was heartbreaking. I love Stevie/Michael as a pairing, and the idea of Michael being so torn apart but so helpless in this whole arrest saga is just so heartwrenching.

[ombu_tree]

mini-team! Yes, that's sort of what I was getting at! (like they are the same, so it's still a hat trick?). Mmm, actually the idea that Stevie would have taken the penalty didn't occur to me until waaay after the match. During the match, I was too *omg! Penalty! Gooo Xabi...score! yay!* ahhaha. Yeah, I'm glad Xabi got the goal (even if it's from a pen)

I like Stevie/Michael too, you don't see too many of those two around (anymore? I guess it's understandable though). Sorry about adding the arrest bit in.. =S. It's just on my mind a lot and I can't help writing current things into my fics =(

Thanks for your feedback on both of these!

[amaelamin_]

augh, the stevie/michael one killed me. :( but in a good way.

[ombu_tree]

Aww, I'm sorry! *sniffle* (but I'm glad to hear it was in a good way. =P)
Thank you for your comment. =)