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Sep 23, 2008 21:30

It's a little unnerving:
air bubbles escaping boiling eggs
sound kinda like chicks.

metaphors, eggs

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nerdsholmferret September 24 2008, 01:41:31 UTC
Syllable counts rise
What brave new haiku is this
That has such meter?

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omarius September 24 2008, 02:03:22 UTC
Who says three-line poems
have to be haiku?
Syllabic fascist!

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reluctantuser September 24 2008, 08:35:19 UTC
hmmm... chicks like here chicky chicky? or the other kind?

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reluctantuser September 24 2008, 12:20:33 UTC
The little yellow ones that come out of unboiled eggs. If they screamed like Fay Wray I'd be *really* freaked out.

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