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Sep 23, 2008 21:30
It's a little unnerving:
air bubbles escaping boiling eggs
sound kinda like chicks.
metaphors
,
eggs
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nerdsholmferret
September 24 2008, 01:41:31 UTC
Syllable counts rise
What brave new haiku is this
That has such meter?
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omarius
September 24 2008, 02:03:22 UTC
Who says three-line poems
have to be haiku?
Syllabic fascist!
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reluctantuser
September 24 2008, 08:35:19 UTC
hmmm... chicks like here chicky chicky? or the other kind?
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reluctantuser
September 24 2008, 12:20:33 UTC
The little yellow ones that come out of unboiled eggs. If they screamed like Fay Wray I'd be *really* freaked out.
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What brave new haiku is this
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have to be haiku?
Syllabic fascist!
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