In loco parentis

[olvidarling]

Title: In loco parentis
Date posted: 03-13-08
Fandom: Alias
Disclaimer: Not mine. I'm just perving them up.
Spoilers: Nothing, really.
Notes: alias500's challenge of a pervy information broker. I can't stand that I wrote this. Special thanks to
non_horation for the idea.

Comments

[yahtzee63]

SO WICKED.

I take it Assante (I am picturing Armand) urged Jack to bring his daughter, so Jack brought the very close facsimilie?

I love how she takes charge of Assante almost immediately. That's our Nadia.

[sunshine_queen]

I know it's wicked! Try finding a title that doesn't ruin the surprise out of the gate!

Assante did that it indeed. Jack was able to kill two birds with one stone.

[counteragent]

Aiiieeeee! Tell me it isn't so?! He just thinks they are related, right? Right?

This was a very hot line, btw:
until they had moved to the bed, her leg crooked around Jack's back with her heel on his spine. The charm of her anklet gleamed.

Something about the detail of the heel on his spine and the anklet just there...Hot.

[counteragent]

I'm assuming that's right because of the title, which I just now paid attention to.

[sunshine_queen]

Yes, you're right. ;)

[sunshine_queen]

Oh, absolutely! They are not related, he just thinks so!

For some reason the idea of her heel on his spine really stuck with me and I had to fight to work it in. I'm glad you liked it!

[dollsome]

OH MY.

[sunshine_queen]

DON'T JUDGE ME.

[dollsome]

You wrote it pretty, my friend. That's all that matters.

[sunshine_queen]

They aren't really related.

[raptor47]

Both elegantly written and unbelievably disturbing. You've done this prompt proud my friend!

[sunshine_queen]

Thank you so much!

[violaswamp]

OMG SO BAD AND WRONG.

(and hot)

[sunshine_queen]

Thank you!