All it seems I ever write is smut smut smut.

Apr 02, 2009 06:53

Title Waiting for the Sun (smut version)
Pairing Sunstreaker/Sideswipe
Rating M
Warnings Twincest Ahoy!
Summary Tarps didn’t randomly stick into joints and vents. Or flutter quite so much. Primus, and that fragging tickled. And they didn’t…
Author’s Note This is a fluff bunny requested by padawan_sponge . The request was Twins/Prank. Don’t know if I managed to keep ( Read more... )

twincest, smut r us, pissy bonded, sunstreaker/sideswipe

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Comments 17

__wilderness__ April 2 2009, 11:33:14 UTC
*purrs* Defintely love this! I thought the fluff was adorable when I saw it on ff.net and then you go and pull this one out too! Awesome.

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okamichan April 4 2009, 00:51:55 UTC
:D I just had it hidden under the rug and was still dusting it off when I posted on ff.net.

I'm glad you enjoy both!

*huggles*

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tiptoptile April 2 2009, 12:39:38 UTC
There is no problem with smut. Smut is fun.
<3 Poor, poor Sideswipe. I read this over at ff.net and really loved it there too.

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okamichan April 4 2009, 00:56:03 UTC
There really isn't except that I write so much of it! XD

Poor Sideswipe? Because he was so worried? I wouldn't feel sorry for him. Prowl did help him feel better a little. He's not so deprived.

Thanks! :D

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cmdrtekk April 2 2009, 14:07:03 UTC
The short version was nice and fluffy, but your extended version takes the cake. The little bonus scene is actually a nice touch.

Thank you for sharing.

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okamichan April 4 2009, 00:57:48 UTC
Ooh! Glad you like the extended version! *hugs* Prowl kept insisting that he made an appearance throughout the fic.

Thanks for commenting on both! ^_^

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catraven April 2 2009, 18:15:56 UTC
Very nice. Loved the extra, too!

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okamichan April 4 2009, 00:58:06 UTC
Thank you very much!

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bluestreak_pup April 2 2009, 23:41:01 UTC
.... Bahahahahahahahaha! Sunny covered in sunflowers... (snickers). This was really good. It was fluffy and hot, and you have a really good writing style. And hey, I was in it! Though only vaguely. (squees at the bonus scene) PROWL! Like I've said before, I like Prowl and me, but I've got to admit he's cute with Sideswipe. Well, actually, Prowl is ALWAYS cute, no matter who he's with. ^__^

Anyway, I like Sideswipe, especially since he doesn't prank me quite as much as he does others. Sunstreaker's not bad either, though he can be kind of harsh at times. It's just how he is though. I think I'd drop dead from shock if he suddenly turned all sweetness and light.

<.< >.> (sneaks into the bonus scene and snuggles with them all) Foursome!

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okamichan April 4 2009, 01:01:08 UTC
You are speaking to one who enjoys the idea of absolutely whoring Prowl out to just about anyone. So she will, of course, agree that Prowl is cute with anyone. Whether he's happy or notis another matter.

I think this Sides isn't nearly the prankster I have made him out to be in this fic. I prefer my Sides to be more daredevil-y than Prankster, but I'll make special exceptions for his brother.

Don't temptme, Blue.

Did you realize you're an evil Blue?

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bluestreak_pup April 4 2009, 01:18:36 UTC
(gives wide-eyed innocent puppybot look) Who, me? Evil? Whatever makes you think that? <.< >.> Mwahahahahahahaha! (coughs)

(smirks and wiggles doorwings) I don't know if I'd use the term evil, but I'm not as innocent as people like to think I am, and if you decide to write something that I may or may not have tempted you to write, I'd definitely read it. (revs engine in a low purr, leans close and whispers) Just to let you know, though, Prowl isn't the one with the handcuff fetish.

(steps back, looking sweet and innocent, with just the faintest hint of a naughty smile)

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okamichan April 5 2009, 12:06:10 UTC
XD You changed your default icon, I see. More innocent Blue, except you still have devil horns in the form of your chevron.

It'll have to be on my too-long of a need-to-write list for a while, until I get rid of a few other shorts/one-shots. But I am turning something over, whether I'll be able to pull it off is another matter.

My Prowl says it's not a handcuff fetish, it's a dominance fetish. He's the one in control, and the handcuffs are just a reminder of this fact. He also agrees that you are allowed a handcuff fetish, because he could and would put you in them too. ;)

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