Brain's still full of empty

[okamichan]

But I'm trying to nudge Jazz-muse back online by poking incomplete stuff. This particular fic was started some months ago and was intended for a challenge, but it just kepit going. =.= It's for a pairing I absolutely adore and, well, never really see. Wanted it to be smuttier, but my mind's not been in the smut lately. (not even sure if it deserves

Comments

[41spectrums]

Superbly done. The interaction between the characters is great, really gives you more in depth sense of what's going on.

[okamichan]

Thank you! This is one of many character sketches for a larger fic that I'm writing. I'm glad they work.

[tiamat1972]

Its such a sweet pairing. Makes me want to finish my Hound/Blue story but that's one I can't work on at work. Makes me blush to think of doing it. :D

[okamichan]

*pokes* :D:D:D:D Please do. They need more love! Literally!

[okamichan]

I think I've only ever seen two fics with them, and one it was never featured, and the other Blue turned to someone else. =.=

I need to write more with them in it.

Thank you! I'm glad it turned out well.

[realm_of_tory]

^_^

loves!

[okamichan]

Thank ya. :D

[prowlstar]

Aww, that was sweet!
I really liked the passing mentions of scent, and how much Hound loves Bluestreak's. As a tracker, he would have a really sensitive nose (olfactory sensors??), meaning scent would be important for him, something which you obviously thought of, and used very nicely!

[okamichan]

Hound would very much be scent oriented, if for no reason than his job designation. Truthfully, I picked the idea up from Beertree (cause she writes an awesome Hound).

And yes, olfactory sensors. :D (Organics have noses. ;P)

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it.