Comments | okamichan: So... this fic is totally getting longer than I wanted it to be.

okamichan

So... this fic is totally getting longer than I wanted it to be.

Mar 31, 2008 20:01

I became stuck right towards the end of this section, and literally had a flash of inspiration at work. I don't remember the last time I froze as dialogue occurred to me, but I sure did run back to my desk and grab my notebook to write it down. *see the happy Okami!*
Edit: Bluestreak bunnies. When they bite. They bite hard.

Title Three Small Words
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transformers, three simple words, dragonverse, bluestreak, fanfic

Comments 9

tiamat1972 April 1 2008, 02:07:06 UTC

Wow! Very real and detailed. I felt Bluestreak's pain and fear clearly. And I hope Ratchet tears Rail a new exhaust port. Wheeljack will help. :D

Can't wait for Part 2!

*lays out bait for more Bluestreak bunnies*

okamichan April 1 2008, 02:28:41 UTC

I'm pretty sure Rail's gonna have his aft torn to spare parts when Ratchet comes out of surgery. Wheeljack will do what he can, but he knows it's Ratchet's place. Probably won't see it, since it won't be done in front of everyone.

I probably should have started the next section/part/chapter-thing before I closed out of the file.

Thanks :)

See now, doing stuff like that when I have other things I need to be writing, shame on you. ;P lol

purajo April 1 2008, 10:21:14 UTC

Ooooh.. pissed off Wheeljack! Me likes alot! Me would likes to see more of it XD...

okamichan April 1 2008, 18:32:45 UTC

Well, I'm glad Jo likes it lots. Okami will be more than happy to provide more for Jo to see. :D

(I swear, that pissed-off Wheeljack is the main reason I flew so fast through this section. XD;)

__wilderness__ April 1 2008, 12:51:41 UTC

*whimper* Bluestreak!!!

That's it Wheeljack, you tell him... I'm next in line after you and Ratchet to tear Rail a new exhaust port!

okamichan April 1 2008, 18:34:57 UTC

*pats Blue's chevron* He'll pull through, maybe not fine, but he'll still pull through.

Poor Railnot! he only gets a bit part and nobody likes him.

wyntir_rose April 1 2008, 14:25:07 UTC

Oh wow! That was wonderfully written and terribly moving! I can't wait to see what comes next.

okamichan April 1 2008, 18:43:18 UTC

Thank you. It always pleases me to hear that the emotions come through in my writing. I feel like I distance myself so much from the words, that I can't tell. o.o

*pokes Blue* Wake up, so I can continue.

cmdrtekk September 11 2008, 20:10:31 UTC

Wow!