*chirp chirp chirp*

[okamichan]

I think this makes it official: I need to do less writing on my keyboard and more with pen and paper. For some wierd reason I can't seem to think in front of my computer screen. Granted, with paper, I scratch out quite a few lines before I even begin to find te write phrase. *sighs and boots her headspace* TALK TO ME DAMMIT!

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[cmdrtekk]

Nicely written.

[okamichan]

Thank you. ^___^

[okamichan]

I think I'm getting waaaaayyyy too familiar with Leo's personality. I need to play with some other characters. *pokes her muse to see if they'll cooperate*

My understanding is that for Mikey, at least, they wanted one of the turtles to stand out, and promote that sense of innocence. Guess they wanted to emphasize Raph's angry eyes with his golden orbs.

I left it open for exactly that reason! Probably means I'm not gonna continue it, either. :P A little open-endedness never hurt anyone. ;)