Comments | okamichan: Another Vocabulary 'drabble' (TMNT)

okamichan

Another Vocabulary 'drabble' (TMNT)

Sep 21, 2010 21:49

... and I use the term drabble very loosely as always. XD Once again this is an exercise of vocabulary, and less so grammar. So if any words are misused or abused, please feel free to let me know. Thanks. ^_^

and no, still on Smokey. Toshi's still out of commission.

Title Devotion
Characters Mikey,Splinter but characters are really irrelevant
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tmnt, fanfic

Comments 6

aloneindarknes7 September 22 2010, 18:58:24 UTC

That's so sad but wonderfully written. It really makes me think about what I would do in that situation with my parents.

okamichan September 23 2010, 01:44:19 UTC

It's a difficult thing, I imagine, to deal with invalid parents. I don't even know what I would do in such a situation, and I hope to never be faced with it. D:

ninjamisha September 26 2010, 23:25:40 UTC

Wow...this moved me. My grandfather went through this. Sounds just like what he went through days before he died actually. Great great fic.

okamichan September 27 2010, 00:33:32 UTC

Thank you. I didn't give any warnings, so I apologize if I stirred depressing memories unexpectedly.

karasuookami October 29 2010, 18:14:37 UTC

*sits and rereads* For some reason it seems to fit better then the actual ways they say Splinter dies in the comics and series. Much more touching and true to them I think. I positively enjoyed the fact there was no blame or hate towards this great mutant father of theirs. Splinter needs less hate ^_^ Thank you for sharing Okami-senpai. I greatly enjoyed it.

Don "Kar-kun"

okamichan October 31 2010, 01:59:34 UTC

I know how Splinter dies in the comics, but the series? which one? I wouldn't call this a dignified death for Splinter, but I can't really see the guys abandoning him (most especially the '03 guys, cause honestly '03 Splinter is the best 'father' out of the many verses). I'm glad you enjoyed it Kar-kun. *huggles*