Excerpt from The Darkest Night

[ojouchan]

So I'm bored and working out plot for one of my novels. I decided I'd give you all a little snippet of a dialogue between the main characters. So it's behind the cut if you like. Feel free to ask for more elaboration.

Even when she smiled she looked intensely sad. Her eyes held such pain, and if she had ever aged it would have shown in other

Comments

[ruthannereid]

O_O Oh... wow.

I don't suppose I can ask for more....

[elainetyger]

The last bit sounds like what Obi-Wan Kenobi says after Darth Vader blows up Alderaan.

[purpletophat]

...Oooh, that's very intriguing and rather intense. Keep it up.

And have a wonderful birthday party!!

[anonymous]

Jo, e-mail me child.

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