Kuroshitsuji: Masterly Discipline, Part I

Mar 05, 2010 22:27

Title: Masterly Discipline, Part I
Author: Sensei
Words: 1000 precisely
Rating: MA
Summary: A celebration of the first volume of the manga, at last available in manga form in the U.S., this little tale of mastery takes place just after the volume's events.
Warnings: Shoutarific
Author's Note: A long overdue gift for moon_maiden36 who requested a "doggy style" ( Read more... )

kuroshitsuji, citrus_taste, giftfic

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talonsage March 6 2010, 04:43:13 UTC
U.N.F.

Do you have any idea how hot this has me? And I know for a fact you're going to bed here soon.

TEASE.

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 04:46:11 UTC
Forgive me, young master. I thought my bedtime story would please you.

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talonsage March 6 2010, 04:57:18 UTC
*sulks* Do you see this erection Sebastian? Does it look pleased to YOU?

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 04:58:32 UTC
In fact, young master, if I may be so bold: it looks exceedingly pleased. Rigidly so, in fact. *licks lips*

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hoticered March 6 2010, 04:49:50 UTC
AND I JIZZED IN MY PANTS.

Also: I really, really REALLY loved the way you described Ciel's adorable little pout, and the fight Sebastian had with himself NOT to molest him.
And unf fucking unf "I'll show you who is master." Ohh Ciel-chan. So. Hot. Shota. Senses. Tingling.

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 04:56:53 UTC
Your review is an orgasm in itself. So glad to have peaked (ahem) your interest.

The dance of dominance between the two is definitely jizzmatic.

Thank you so much for reading and writing to let me know you enjoyed it. I must now ask: have you read the others in the "Discipline" series I'm writing (all shouta-licious).

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hoticered March 6 2010, 04:58:53 UTC
*JIZZJIZZJIZZ*

Hmm, I think I have. Matter of fact, I'm sure I have. More deliciousness for my shota!senses. They are a'tingling. With delight.

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 05:00:09 UTC
Delight on, o superhero of teh jizz!

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crescent_moony March 6 2010, 05:10:48 UTC
KLSJDKSLAJDSKALJDKSJDASJHASGHSADJKASHDA~<3<3<3<3<3

This is exactly the pick-me-up I needed after a sad day of Anti-Shouta Forces trying to ruin my life.

As always, your writing is utterly delicious. Sebastian's dialogue (and introspection) especially was perfectly IC and a delight to read; it sent shivers down my own spine. I can hardly wait for the next chapter~!

*dances*

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 05:18:17 UTC
Oh I'm thrilled you like it! I hoped you would enjoy the shouta and the dance of dominance and the shouta! Heh. I'm sorry your day was sad. I've had a rough week myself. But I so enjoyed writing this and am so glad the reading gave you pleasure too.

But now I've written myself into the corner of having to do some serious graphic shouta and, like the bath fic, it takes some serious fighting of the guilt monster and the blushies to do it. But I shall strive!

Have a wonderful night, sweet thing.

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crescent_moony March 6 2010, 05:23:11 UTC
I loved it. I was giggling and blushing and hiding my face with my hands the whole while! ...all for good reasons, I assure you. X3 I'm sorry to hear your week was rough, as well-- but there's nothing like a good fanfic to take the edge off! And this was a very, very good fanfic. <3

Haha, I know what you mean. That's not really my cuppa, either-- hence all of that flowery, vague stuff I tend to write. XD;;; I wish you the best of luck, though; I look forward to reading whatever results you end up with! \o/

You as well, my dear~ *hugz*

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 15:50:58 UTC
I fear I've locked myself into having to go graphic... I shall strive to make you blush and giggle even harder!

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raffi March 6 2010, 10:56:05 UTC
...

Do you- do you know what you did to me?

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 15:50:18 UTC
Perhaps you should tell me all about what I did to you, princese?

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raffi March 6 2010, 18:23:25 UTC
I believe I can't muster a single coherent thought after reading this delicious fic.

I-I- Well, I think.. Forget the whole 'what you DID to me' part; the right thing to say after reading this would be 'Do you know what you can DO to me?'

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 18:25:37 UTC
Ah yes, I see. But now I want you to tell me what I CAN DO to you. *grin*

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rebukes March 6 2010, 13:28:26 UTC
*chuckles* Ciel's such a little petulant bastard. And that Sebastian endures it and enjoys it is gorgeous.

Love, as always. <3

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salomesensei March 6 2010, 15:49:54 UTC
I love that you can never predict who'll be on top. And of course Sebastian's arrogance. Thanks for reading it, and commenting, and the love. &hearts

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