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Apr 13, 2007 18:33

    You wake up to beeps and flashes. You try to talk, but there’s something shoved down your throat. You settle for turning your head and seeing him sitting in the uncomfortable hospital chair. He’s playing his Gameboy. You can guess that it’s more than likely some new Mario game.

You wonder how long he’s been sitting there, but you can’t talk ( Read more... )

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disco_xdramatic April 13 2007, 23:45:12 UTC
FC?
I just read the first chapter. So now I'm reading this one.
-goes to reaad-

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disco_xdramatic April 13 2007, 23:49:11 UTC
Aw, the ending = sweetness.
I'm not a huge Brencer fan like I am a Ryden freak, but I'm starting to lean towards it. :]
This is really good. I'd ask for another chapter, but I can't really see where you would go with it.

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ohwowkatherine April 13 2007, 23:51:01 UTC
awehh thank you<3
yeah, i'm kind of out of ideas. this was just supposed to have one part, but then people forced me asked me to write more.

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gangsta_shibby April 13 2007, 23:58:16 UTC
Awesome! Both chapters! Will there be more?

:]

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ohwowkatherine April 14 2007, 00:00:00 UTC
if i have any random spurts of inspiration, yes.<3

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anonymous April 14 2007, 00:27:10 UTC
im assuming theres gonna be a third chapter... just an assumtion! :) lol but yes...really good!!!!!:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D:D i love u.
WRITE MORE NOW OR BEAR THE PAIN OF THE RABID KOALA(however u spell that) BEARS!!!!

oh and heres a cookie *gives cookie*

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ohwowkatherine April 14 2007, 00:32:22 UTC
i'm waiting for my inspiration. then i'll see what i can do.
and thank you, i like cookies. XD

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grandnature04 April 14 2007, 00:28:08 UTC
forgive me for being a dumbass... I read the first one knowing there was more... but I'm so smart I forgot! lmao...

*runs off to read*

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ohwowkatherine April 14 2007, 00:34:01 UTC
it's alright. i do that sometimes.

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