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fireapparition February 14 2011, 20:07:58 UTC
god, I'm glad you wrote a Subyung one. I really like this. ah yea, no, I love this actually. <33

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ohsugarandsalt February 15 2011, 02:48:41 UTC
Well thank you! I miss Sunbyung :(.

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driftaway143 February 14 2011, 21:16:02 UTC
[She wanted to know what colour was.]

I found it a little ironic that this was your topic in the story because just the other day my brother was like "Did you know that blind people dream in black & white" (My reply was "don't we all dream in black & white?" but that's irrelevant)

But yeah it got me thinking how would you describe a colour to a blind person...?

You made me think of it differently to describe it as a feeling more than anything else

[She squealed at the touch of rough tangled seaweed and bulbous sea squirts.]

I found it funny how Sunny would scream at such a thing xD

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ohsugarandsalt February 14 2011, 23:10:47 UTC
oops! I totally got the characterization wrong D:. I think I might change it to "She retracted her hand at the touch...".

lol, I like how appropriate your icon is.

Explaining colour to a person who only knows what black is...I would assume would be impossible. I'd probably try and describe them using my four other senses.

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driftaway143 February 15 2011, 00:41:02 UTC
Why thank you. It's one of my favourite icons =P

[I'd probably try and describe them using my four other senses.] - I'm not smart enough to think outside the box like that xD

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agent_jung February 14 2011, 23:11:46 UTC
oh God, i can die now ;~; it's so beautiful ;~;
thank you, this made my valentine's day :p

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ohsugarandsalt February 15 2011, 02:51:07 UTC
Thanks for reading :D.

Happy Valentine Days to you <3!

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chikaon08 February 15 2011, 06:42:40 UTC
God I squealed when I read it the first time and I still got tingles reading it the second time. Sunbyung is SUCH a cute couple and I think you wrote them quite well. I loved their first meeting scene. I laugh because I think Hyomin can say pretty blunt things like that without meaning to and Sunny's reply is just so Sunny.

I liked how you made Sunny blind, but not too blind so you can have scenes like the one where she knows Hyomin is staring at her. Sunny wanting to know color and Hyomin taking her out to show her was too sweet.

Ah anyway thanks for the valentine's day gift! I hope you write more Sunbyung!

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ohsugarandsalt February 15 2011, 09:28:22 UTC
Well, I think Sunbyung couple and fluff go together like strawberries and cream. Will definitely consider writing more Sunbyung in the future ^^.

haha yes, I can imagine Hyomin can be a bit babo and unintentionally blunt sometimes.

Thank you for the lovely comment and for reading <3!

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soshiknowsbest February 15 2011, 16:46:24 UTC
okay, i totally ship this. wah~ it's so cute, even when hyomin is being a bit of a creeper as usual ><

it was a bit of a new take to see sunny forced to depend on hyomin a bit but i think with their personalities either of them could take the lead, nicely done. hope you write more sunbyung ^^

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ohsugarandsalt February 16 2011, 05:50:38 UTC
lol yeah, I actually had a whole scene dedicated to stalker!Hyomin- but decided it was too creepy.

I definitely consider writing more Sunbyung!

btw, your Yuri icon killed me x_x.

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soshiknowsbest February 17 2011, 02:55:25 UTC
mhmm. epic hnnnng~

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