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twilightshours in ohsam

Blink

Aug 02, 2010 00:46

( Dean does seem really tired, and he wonders how he didn't notice it before. )

fever, nightmares, insomnia, hallucinations, [my bloody valentine], exhaustion

Comments 33

dawnintheforest August 2 2010, 15:46:24 UTC

Wait, what?! What? What's going on?! I have this inkling, but I don't know that I can trust it. And that's all kinda' brilliant, but at the same time I'm just left feeling shaken! Which must surely be your aim, yes? Whaaa! What was Sam not managing to notice at first? The lack of dream!Dean's heartbeat? The temperature of his touch? Something in his eyes? Is this Lucifer trying to break Sam down into agreement, just like he did with Nick in the beginning of S5?!
Will there be more, or are we meant to be left flailing? I'm cool with either I guess, but I want to know if you know, you know?! ; )

twilightshours August 2 2010, 18:42:27 UTC

Haha, well, I'm glad you're shaken up! :) What Sam wasn't noticing, at least in the beginning, was simply that Dean looked really tired. It might have morphed into something else as the story went on. ;D
To be honest, what was really wrong with Sam is as much a mystery to me as it is to you! I try not to write with strict guidelines as to what the whole picture is, you know, it's just the cliche of 'the story writes itself'. I'm afraid I probably won't be continuing it, but if there's any possibility, it would be that I go back and write a version of Dean's POV.
Thanks again!

dontknowmyname August 2 2010, 16:56:25 UTC

Very creepy but so very good! Great job! =)

twilightshours August 2 2010, 19:00:13 UTC

Thanks! :)

medea34 August 2 2010, 17:11:05 UTC

freaky and creepy. I'm tired. something we all say so often. the play between (not?)real and dream - brilliant.

twilightshours August 2 2010, 18:59:55 UTC

Yes, I like the prospect of taking something so mundane and common and twisting it into a weapon of sorts. Thank you very much!

de_nugis August 2 2010, 18:14:29 UTC

Once upon a time I put up a prompt about Sam having nightmares of Dean killing him, and the prompt never got filled.

So now I am taking your fic as not only brilliant in itself, but a present to me personally.

*appropriates with grabby hands*

Thank you!

twilightshours August 2 2010, 18:53:04 UTC

Oh, yay! :) I'm glad I could be of service to you. I'm pretty surprised myself to say I haven't stumbled upon much anything of the Dean-hunting-Sam variety. It's good to know the idea's at least out there.
Thank you, as well!

ofsoapsuds August 2 2010, 23:33:45 UTC

OMG I think I'm afraid to got to bed now! It was beautifully written even if it gives my the heebie jeebies.

twilightshours August 3 2010, 06:12:05 UTC

Sweet! :) Well, sorta. Don't be too afraid- and thank you!