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comment fic meme!

Aug 02, 2011 01:56

Following the results of the poll we took last month (don't make it easy on us or anything, guys, haha!), we've decided to hold a comment fic meme once every three months. This gives everyone time to write and prompt to their heart's content, and allows us mods to keep up with y'all. And we're starting right now!

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crazybeagle August 7 2011, 04:26:10 UTC

The boys are arguing. And this happens to be the one and only time that Dean ever takes his anger out on Sam in a violent way. Maybe it was an accident. Maybe he was really drunk. Maybe he was cursed. Maybe he was just really angry and he screwed up. The thing is, Sam actually gets hurt, and it's Dean's fault. Cue massive guilt and general awesomeness afterwards.
Brownie points if Sam thinks he deserved it for whatever reason. Or is angry about it. Or somehow scared of Dean.
Gen pretty please. Any season or pre-series or whenever.

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 4/4 sylvia37 August 10 2011, 06:47:22 UTC

Sniff....

I always love it when I see that you've posted and I'm never disappointed. This was so good.

I'm kinda glad they didn't do this on the show even though I could definitely see Sam taking it. It was hard enough to read much less having to watch.

Great Job!

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 4/4 embroiderama August 13 2011, 19:24:22 UTC

Oh, GAH! This is painful but so very good.

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 4/4 destinyjadams August 14 2011, 19:19:27 UTC

So sequel with Dean running off to protect Sam from himself and Sam tracking him down? :) No, just kidding.

Seriously though, amazing prompt and amazing fill. I actually went back to your ff.net account and reread all my favorite stories of yours (which was an awful lot of them). Thank you so much for sharing your fic with us!!

-Desi Jo

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 4/4 jagfanlj August 18 2011, 06:50:40 UTC

What a wonderful prompt, and a brilliant fill to go with it.

brb,
Gone to smother the boys in TLC.

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 4/4 varkelton September 13 2011, 02:32:38 UTC

Congratulations! Your story has been recced at spn_littlebro!

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sylvaniae October 21 2012, 19:37:16 UTC

VERY nicely done. Plausible, as well, which makes it all the more sad and realistic for the show. Those two will have a lot to work through after something like that, to say the least. What's so heartbreaking about it is that Sam is always so forgiving because it's part of who he is. Like Castiel, he cares too much.

reggie11 October 11 2013, 05:32:29 UTC

God, this was SO good and so incredibly sad.

RE: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 4/4 crazybeagle January 6 2019, 01:31:56 UTC

That's mindblowing fantastic

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 3/? leighannwallace September 3 2012, 01:37:19 UTC

No one ever thinks so badly of Sam as he does himself. Great story. Heartbreaking.

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 1/? crazybeagle August 9 2011, 01:42:43 UTC

I love that it was you who picked this, may I just say, because your work never ceases to bring a smile to my face.
That said- This is FANTASTIC. I was really hoping somebody would take this and go with the route of Dean actually being somewhat culpable. And of course, he has every right to be furious with Sam at this point in the story anyway, so add alcohol and presto....sigh.
And of course, that Sam wasn't fighting back...
>sniffle< Shot to the heart.
Can't wait for more.

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 1/? authoressnebula August 9 2011, 03:28:30 UTC

Aw, thank you so much! ^_^ That means a lot to me.

Dean had a lot of anger in season 5 towards the world, towards Sam, and a lot of it came from season 4. It didn't just go away. And Dean strikes me as the angry type of drunk. The more he drinks, the more maudlin he gets, like Sam, but initial drinking? Barfights. He's itching and spoiling for one, and I see him as the type to start it if he doesn't get one.

Thus, Sam!pain. And I couldn't help but add in the part that Sam wouldn't fight back, because you know he wouldn't.

It's all finished now; I hope you enjoy!

~Nebula

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 1/? sandycub August 9 2011, 21:57:05 UTC

This was just so good I Don't have words!! Poor Sam feeling like he deserved it! Even poor Dean after realizing what he had truly done!

Really felt like the boys voices both in anger and in offering apologies! Such a touching piece!

Brilliant writing as always!

Re: FILLED: You Never Forget Your First, 1/? authoressnebula August 10 2011, 00:05:52 UTC

Thank you so much sweetie! I'm glad Dean came through okay; writing him as someone hurting Sam is always a fine line to walk, because I don't want him to come out of character, but the prompt was SO AWESOME. Couldn't help but write it. :)

So yes, very happy that Dean sounds like he should and that both boys are hurting well! :P

~Nebula

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