comment fic meme!

[mimblexwimble]

Following the results of the poll we took last month (don't make it easy on us or anything, guys, haha!), we've decided to hold a comment fic meme once every three months. This gives everyone time to write and prompt to their heart's content, and allows us mods to keep up with y'all. And we're starting right now!

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FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 1/? Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[running_hot]

A/N: Alright, this is set near the beginning of Season 1, and it really got away from me there at the end. Unbetaed, sort of unedited, and I’m not sure whether I like it, but I’m posting before I chicken out

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 2/? Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[running_hot]

“My feet are wet. The water’s cold -- and the little girl is back again, she doesn’t seem very nice.” It’s true; she’s throwing lamps, tables, books, everything near her across the room, breaking everything in her path

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 3/? Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[running_hot]

His legs will barely hold him, but he’s got just enough strength to walk forward and just enough sense to realize that Dean needs him, so he grabs the sweat-slicked metal and hauls up, up, up until Dean is free

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[running_hot]

As more and more of his consciousness returns to him, Sam shakes his head to dislodge the last of the horrendous hallucinations. “What the fuck just happened?” Dean presses Sam back against the shoddily made motel bed and gives a weak, exhausted imitation of his macho smile

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[greeneyes_fan]

Oh, Sam. Poor puppy.

And the hallucinations are awesome. Ravens, people, extra doors. Still, he figures it out in the end!

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[running_hot]

I quite like writing hallucinations, even if I have trouble writing reactions to them, so I'm glad it worked out reasonably well! Thanks for reading :D

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[jagfanlj]

Having had hallucinations due to a fever, I can say you nailed it.
It's hard to know wht's real and what's not. Even when I KNEW that pillow wasn't really there, I kept reaching for it. Although, I was pretty sure the melting gift-bag was a hallucination, since it was floating in midair and changing from green to purple as it melted. :P

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[de_nugis]

Awww! This is lovely and perfect and sweet. I love the mixture of exasperated and worried and teasing in Dean, and Sam blundering through hallucinations to get to him so that he can rescue and get rescued. I am so glad you wrote this for me.

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[running_hot]

Thank you so much! I was happy to write it - the prompt was really great and right up my alley, and I had a great time with it. I see that exasperated-covering-up-worry-with-humor thing a lot in Dean, and I'm sort of surprised it doesn't come up more often in fic. Again, thanks :3

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[tahirire]

Awww, Sammy. *snuggles*

Gotta admit though, I totally laughed out loud at “G’way, little girl. It’s naptime.” LOLOL.

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[running_hot]

I sort of chuckled when writing it, despite the subject matter and despite that I don't normally laugh at my own lines.

Doesn't Sammy always need a good snuggle? Poor guy. We fans sure do love to torture him! Thanks for reading :D

Re: FILLED: The Shadow Dancer, 4/4 Gen, implied past Sam/Jess

[jagfanlj]

*cuddles & comforts Dean & Sam*
Scary, funny, and tender all at once, that's not an easy trick o pull off. Wicked hallucinations! I had trouble sorting out what was real. (That's not a bad thing.)