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And this Great Blue World of Ours, Chapter 8

Jul 01, 2011 17:18

Title: And this Great Blue World of Ours (Chapter 8)
Author: vail_kagami
Beta: minviendha
Characters (overall): Dean, Castiel, Sam, plus a number of angels and demons
Rating (overall): NC-17
Warnings (overall): violence, torture, drug use, insanity, mentions of rape
Spoilers: Going AU during episode 5.18: Point of No Return. No spoilers for season six.
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starvation, sexual abuse: non-con, cough, fever, broken bones/fractures, » fic, chronic pain, psychic powers, .genre » gen, chronic illness, blindness, insanity, cuts/lacerations, fainting/collapse, withdrawal, injury, sexual assault, addiction, hell/post-hell issues, substance abuse, infection, abuse, blood loss, torture, unconsciousness, exhaustion

Comments 4

marziebarz July 4 2011, 17:57:30 UTC

WHAT???? Sam won't...but...I don't...NO!!! I mean it makes sense, nobody with enough power will care if they succeed, but still, NO!!! DO NOT LIKE. Aaaaaaaagh!!!

Castiel telling the story of how he had to leave Sam behind was heartbreaking. And Dean getting pissed about it was kind of sweet, but at the same time, there was no other choice. Cas did the only thing he could possibly have done, and then he got Sam back out. Cas saved Sam in all the ways he could, no matter what happened. I definitely like Cas more than Dean in this story.

Anyways this is still epic and awesome and I can't wait for more! =D

vail_kagami July 4 2011, 20:39:23 UTC

I guess it shows that this story was born at a time when I was kind of unhappy with Dean. I still try to make his position understandable (considering he doesn't have all the facts we do), but that's hard. Especially since he doesn't really understand his position himself.
It gets worse in the next chapter.

There are so many little stories I want to tell about Cas and Sam and their time without Dean. Maybe, when the fic is finished, I'll do some time stamps.
But I also think some stories are better left untold.

Don't give up on Sam just yet! This story is actually going somewhere.

And thank you once again for your comment! It was a very nice birthday present!

marziebarz July 5 2011, 06:25:56 UTC

His position is completely understandable - its just that his position at this point in S5, and for much of the two-ish years leading up to this point, pissed me off. I don't like this "getting worse" business, though =P it worries me greatly coming from you, haha.

Yes! I want to hear everything that ever happened to them in that time! Because secretly their friendship is my favorite thing about S5, so awkward and so ridiculous and yet so cute. Although I suppose I kind of agree with you about the untoldness.

I will never give up on Sam. Ever. I'm kind of a fairly hardcore Sam!girl that way ^_^

Whoa, really? HAPPY BIRTHDAYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!1 =D

vail_kagami July 5 2011, 21:29:17 UTC

Thank you! :)

Time stamps will definitely come - once I got through the main body of the fic. Phew. (I'm nearing the 100,000 words line, and no end in sight.)

I love Sam and Cas's S5 relationship as well. Wish they had done something with that.

Season 5 Dean is pretty much beyond redemption to me. The other day I was watching another show in which a character was in a situation similar to Sam's in that season: He had good intentions and became estranged to his friends (including his girlfriend) over his convinction that he was doing good and their conviction that he was wrong. When it turned out that he had trusted the wrong people and the others' were right after all, and it was his girlfriend's turn to show a reaction to his apology, all I could think was "Please don't be Dean! Please don't be Dean!"