Just One More Thing 2/4

Jan 14, 2011 08:55

Title: Just One More Thing
Author: jennytork
Rating: PG
Summary: Sam is injured worse in the crash than was shown. So, being a Winchester, he tries to hide it.
Word Count: 462
Warnings: little language, nothing in this part
Prompt: From the h/c meme -- Sam is injured worse in the car crash in "Devil's Trap" than was shown. Many thanks to embroiderama for letting me ( Read more... )

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phx69 January 14 2011, 16:28:00 UTC
OOh I loved Sam calling him Uncle Bobby at the end. It shows just how freaked out he is and how vulnerable he feels. He needs Bobby to be there for him. And I love him for not trying to hide it - not that he really can but still, it is refreshing that he immediately calls for help.

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jennytork January 17 2011, 17:30:10 UTC
Thank you! *grin*

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primrose_1 January 14 2011, 18:52:17 UTC
I love this from Sam's point of view- the discovery, the panic as he realizes what it actually means! LOVES!

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jennytork January 17 2011, 17:30:31 UTC
Thank you!

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vonnie836 January 14 2011, 18:54:48 UTC
Really loved these first two chapters. The denial, maybe more because of all the stress he is under and because he doesn't have time to really acknowledge it. And then the first quiet time and the realization hits. The moment of thinking that he isn't really death, until his mind tells him otherwise. And the call for help, the panic and the incredible vulnerability. I really adore this. Hugs, Vonnie

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jennytork January 17 2011, 17:31:18 UTC
Thank you so much!

And I think you mean "deaf"?

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vonnie836 January 17 2011, 18:58:03 UTC
Oops, yeah, I meant deaf. Where is my mind? Hugs, Vonnie

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cece_away January 20 2011, 17:57:32 UTC
Oh Sam, he is breaking my heart. So glad Bobby is there and Sam feels able to tell him.

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jennytork January 21 2011, 02:56:55 UTC
Thank you!!

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dont_hate_me01 January 21 2011, 17:44:41 UTC
Poor Sammy, he is so alone, calling Bobby, uncle! This was so sad!

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jennytork January 21 2011, 22:39:55 UTC
Thank you!

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