Time

[ohrangee]

Title: Time
Rating: PG-13
Pairing/s: Chen/Lay
Summary: Jongdae just want his time back.
Author Notes: Just some horrible idea that came up.
Warning: ending's quite rash
Length: 4130 words

Comments

[nadinadara]

ahh...this is really interesting, indeed.
such a shame that the ending's quite rushed, but I think I got it
I like the fact that you personified time in this fic; it was really unexpected imo, but I think it's cool
like, usually people would come up with some weird supernatural shiz
ahhh when Time said that it was punishing jongdae for wasting him, it actually made sense
at least they meet years after ; u ; it was cruel of Time to leave jongdae with memories of yixing, but I guess that's what it needed to do to get jongdae to wake up.(and yixing had said that he felt like he'd met jongdae before omf I'm pretty sure he sorta felt the pain jongdae went through before meeting him) ♡

[ohrangee]

i was losing ideas at the end ;u; hahaha, i'm glad you liked it. well, Time had to trade somehow. I know T__T but oh well, he gotta learn the hard way. hehehe. thanks for taking the time to read this story and comment (:

[charliebnim]

:' <3