How Not to Impress a Host [Chapter 6]

[ohmygeng]

Title: How Not to Impress a Host [Chapter 6]
Pairing(s): Donghae-centric. Donghae/Eunhyuk; side!Han Geng/Heechul and Yesung/Sungmin
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Romance, Friendship, a fair bit of Angst
Disclaimer: Contrary to popular belief, no one owns them.
Warning: Mild language and mature themes.
Summary: Donghae knows that ‘getting smitten with a fair-

Comments

[akirin]

spot! :)

[akirin]

i love this chapter! i like the little 'disagreement' between hyukjae and donghae. really, they're so cute! And i actually get a glimpse of hyukjae's feelings for donghae which the latter, sadly, didn't recognize. But howell, that is just so in character since he's always the clueless one! :D

I always love how you write Youngwoon in this fic. He always leave a lovable expression to me after reading the fic. Makes me miss him more and excited for his comeback! \o/

Now, i am most intrigued of Heechul's love story. Why is he such a tease, anw? :)) Donghae's such an eager person. roflmao!

[ohmygeng]

You do? I'm glad, because I thought it was too long-winded...Heck, this chapter was expanded into three parts; of course it's long-winded! orz Well, they're just a pair of awkward youths, y'know? Haha, I'm pleased you picked up on that! Can't blame Hyukjae for going on the offensive to mask his disappointment. That, and if Donghae had recognized it, the fic would end in the next chapter LOL.

Yay for fic!Youngwoon, but really, he's the one I worry about underwriting the most. So I'm curious to know what you think of him in this fic. ^^ Awww, I can't wait as well! :')

If I included HanChul's love story here, this fic would probably be like 30+ chapters knowing me LOL. OTL So it'll be elaborated on in a one-shot, probably after this one ends. We'll see. ^^ Haha, Heechul has his reasons. (: And Donghae...is Donghae.

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[paradigm_twist]

So pretty much intrigue with Hanchul's backstory which I shall now stalk Chapter 7 for.

But the little disagreement between Donghae and Eunhyuk is interesting. I went through something similar in high school so the feelings and queries are understandable. But Heechul you sneaky person. Why you act so brash all the time? xD You scar your employees that's what.

And oh. Here's a typo.

“So if you had assumed that he wooed me through a barrage of alcoholic drinks and sweet nothings, you have another think coming.” I'm sure you meant thing.

^^

[ohmygeng]

Haha! I apologise in advance, because I'll only be touching on their backstory properly in a separate one-shot; you know this fic will never end if I don't do that. OTL

Glad you thought so! Sometimes, you just need a...trigger, y'know? Because Heechul is Heechul, and he wouldn't have it any other way. XD Donghae's been scarred more than once; the poor guy. D':

That's what I thought before reading the book, but it's really 'think'. The phrase's used more than once in there, and well, after some Googling a while back, 'think' really does fit. http://www.phrases.org.uk/meanings/another-think-coming.html

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[khaus414]

Yay! Thanks for the update! ^^

[ohmygeng]

Well, thank you more for putting up with my erratic updates! ;~;

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[khaus414]

awww, well erratic updates are still updates!! thank you~ :D

[andygreeniz]

Spot!
Yay! I has a feeling I should check today! Be careful the title on your chapter 7 still says chapter 5 (not the article title, in the description).

[andygreeniz]

Oh. OH. Stories within the story. I really like it when third characters become important :D I didn't understand the mockingbird thing though...
Clueless!Donghae. Awww <3

[ohmygeng]

Right, right...Thank you so much for the heads up! ^^ I got lazy in correcting the fic and the minor details. OTL

Are you referring to Taehwan and Jiyoon's relationship? Haha, yeah, they do possess significance, or else, I would have wasted like almost 1000 words on them lol. @____@ The mockingbird thing...You don't have to read much too it, it's not really relevant here. I just liked how much Heechul reminded me of Miss Maudie Atkinson. XD

It wouldn't be Donghae if he wasn't!

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[natsuberry]

nice arguments :D

[ohmygeng]

It's a shame that Donghae couldn't pick up on the underlying message earlier, before their argument became a disagreement! But that wouldn't be fun, would it? XD

Thank you for reading and commenting! :D

[natsuberry]

wouldn't that be part of the chase, still? >:)

thank you for conceptualizing and writing this fic! :D

[ohmygeng]

That's true, and the summary is all about Donghae courting Hyukjae (and failing most of the time) anyway, so what am I saying?! orz

Haha, that's too cute of you! :'D I enjoyed thinking up the plot here. (: