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[Drabble]:End -- Day 255

Sep 12, 2013 19:44

Title:End
Character:Aiba Masaki
Genre/Rating:Angst / R
Word Count:591
Disclaimer:I own nothing but the plot
Summary:He watched them disappear one by one until he was the last one left.
Warning:Heavy deaths, mention of blood, and character death.
A/n:Inspired by The Purge even though I've never read the book or watched the movie. The plot of his fic ( Read more... )

character:aiba, length:drabble, rating:r, genre:deathfic, genre:angst, fic challenge

Comments 2

jazmyn_violetha September 13 2013, 14:03:13 UTC

It's a really good angsty fic. I liked how u described the shooter as Evil on Earth. Sugoi!
If this is what u do when u have writers block, I want to have it LOL

neko_kirin3104 September 15 2013, 00:18:25 UTC

I've watched The Purge, and the concept of a world that comes to that really scared the crap out of me.

But this story has its own horrifying feel to it that really sent shivers down my spine. Setting it at a school with all those helpless kids is reminiscent of the shool shootings that happened a lot earlier this year and this gave your story a shade of reality that's really terrifying for me. O.O

My heart hurt when young Aiba got shot. I felt his helplessness and my heart just bled. T.T