Fragments of a Shattered Life 31

[ohinyan]

Title: Fragments of a Shattered Life
Part: 31/35
Rating: 18+
Warnings: Explicit violence, non-con
Genre: Angst, AU
Characters: Jack Harkness, Ianto Jones, The Master (Simm), 10th Doctor
Summary: After POTW Jack's life takes a turn for the worse and he desperately needs help. A Doctor Who/

Comments

[randomfangirl99]

Fantastic, great chapter!
The Doctor's eyes have been really opened now! I think viewing it himself would have been the only way for the Doctor to truly realise what has happened to Jack.
Ianto's on his way (yay!)
Why do I get the feeling that the Master is not going to hand Jack ov er easily?
Looking forward to the next chapter, with the Doctor knowing he's in the wrong.

[ohinyan]

Thank you. Yes the Doctor has a much greater understanding of what his actions caused now. He now wants to make up for it.

I hope I did their confrontation justice in the next chapter (which I've just posted).

[jsks]

my heart broke over this chapter.

[ohinyan]

I have to say I'm glad that you are so involved in the story. I always love to read heartbreaking stories.

[ohinyan]

I'm glad you like it.

[viomisehunt]

How horrific for poor Jack. Hurry Ianto!

[ohinyan]

Both Ianto and the Doctor now want to help Jack. And we only have 3 chapters to go!

[teleens_journal]

Wow. Amazing chapter. I really can't wait for the next one!

Thanks for writing! :)

[ohinyan]

Thank you. I have just posted the next one.

[teleens_journal]

Yay!