Haiku While We Wait, Now WIth Bonus Limericks!

[tkeylasunset]

Since Ohana Favorites voting doesn't start until next Sunday, let's use the time until then writing Hawaii 5-0 Haiku!!!

Why? Why Haiku?

Why not? I love Haiku. I suck at writing them but that doesn't matter! (And I think Chin would find it really Zen, don't you?)

What is Haiku? Here you go (stolen shamelessly from here.

Comments

[haldoor]

God, I love Haiku. (and limericks too - we should do them some time!)

Here's mine:

Leaving the water
Steve's body glistens wetly
Danny's eyes linger

[tkeylasunset]

Oh fabulous!!!!!

[haldoor]

Thank you! *bows*

[rocsfan]

That is perfection in a haiku!

If you don't do limericks here, we'll do them on h50-daily. :)

Okay, Since I Started It

[tkeylasunset]

The wave comes for her.
The one that is perfection.
"Catch your own, haole!"

Re: Okay, Since I Started It

[haldoor]

Brilliant!

[deepbluemermaid]

I always loved writing haiku at school. Here's my first attempt:

Stoic, silent Chin,
Mirror lake above, so calm;
Volcano beneath.

[tkeylasunset]

Fabulous!

[haldoor]

Oh! That is wondrous! Keep going! ;-)

[rocsfan]

That is superb!

[rocsfan]

The murderer flees.
Ka-boom goes the loaded gun;
Kono hits her mark.

[tkeylasunset]

Go Kono Go Kono!!!

Thank you!! Wonderful!!!!

[haldoor]

Oh, nice!

[decynthus]

"Steven, shut your face"
"Oh, seriously, Danno?"
Cargument again

[tkeylasunset]

This is why I love Haiku. So few words. So much said!

Thank you!!! Fabulous!!

[haldoor]

HA! Great!

[fatorangekat]

Oh way cute, love it!