Fight Greg! Stay alive. Fight Nick! Keep him alive. Even with all he'll have to deal with, you fight to keep him going.
Love how all the characters are so spot on. They act just the way you'd expect them too (like Brass)... This is an amazing fic. One of the best stories I have ever read (fic or otherwise).
Thank you so much for your nice review. I've wondered if I was boring people to death with this epic that just won't stop.
Every site seems to be slowing down as more and more fans become disenchanted with the direction the show has taken. I think that's why I decided to write this. It's my way of flipping the bird to the current stable of writers.
It's a shame that my desire to say something has coinsided with a general disinterest. Obviously I'm not going to pout and say if you don't praise me I'm not going to write. I can't not write this even if no one but me ever reads it. I just wish I knew if I'm doing it right.
I'm glad my story moved you even if it did move you to tears. That's what a writer is supposed to do; evoke emotion.
Love your story
anonymous
September 18 2007, 00:38:18 UTC
Sorry I'm anonymous as I don't have an account, but I wanted to tell you I have really enjoyed following your writing. Can't wait to see what happens...hoping for the best as this one wiped out my kleenex account!
You wrote Nick's response perfectly for him-I feel his pain and inability to deal with anything than going to find out WTF is happening.
Catherine at almost 659 years old I'm sure this is a typo, but it stopped my reading enough to figure out whether you were trying to say something else.
The flashback of the meeting was a great way to keep the momentum of the story going, without being overboard.
Such a powerful description of Brass, the helplessness (wiping my tears away again)! Oh, poor Nick and Greg. No one should ever make Brass cry that way!
Grissom to the rescue, brilliant. (Still cryin...) "I will fight for him." more tears streaming from my eyes. Greg sounds so mortally wounded. I'm glad that he's alive, but I wonder what his life will be like if/when he recovers.
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Fight Greg! Stay alive. Fight Nick! Keep him alive. Even with all he'll have to deal with, you fight to keep him going.
Love how all the characters are so spot on. They act just the way you'd expect them too (like Brass)... This is an amazing fic. One of the best stories I have ever read (fic or otherwise).
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Every site seems to be slowing down as more and more fans become disenchanted with the direction the show has taken. I think that's why I decided to write this. It's my way of flipping the bird to the current stable of writers.
It's a shame that my desire to say something has coinsided with a general disinterest. Obviously I'm not going to pout and say if you don't praise me I'm not going to write. I can't not write this even if no one but me ever reads it. I just wish I knew if I'm doing it right.
I'm glad my story moved you even if it did move you to tears. That's what a writer is supposed to do; evoke emotion.
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Note to self: Self, see that virtual Kleenex are provided with every chapter.
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Catherine at almost 659 years old I'm sure this is a typo, but it stopped my reading enough to figure out whether you were trying to say something else.
The flashback of the meeting was a great way to keep the momentum of the story going, without being overboard.
Such a powerful description of Brass, the helplessness (wiping my tears away again)! Oh, poor Nick and Greg. No one should ever make Brass cry that way!
Grissom to the rescue, brilliant. (Still cryin...) "I will fight for him." more tears streaming from my eyes. Greg sounds so mortally wounded. I'm glad that he's alive, but I wonder what his life will be like if/when he recovers.
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