Comments | oh_nessa: If you fall (1/?)

oh_nessa

If you fall (1/?)

Jan 03, 2011 00:35

Arizona pressed her forehead against the cool metal of her locker and exhaled deeply. She entered the combination absentmindedly and pulled the door open; staring at the content of the small box did nothing to jog her memory as to why she’d opened it in the first place and she almost shut it again before finally remembering she needed her phone. ( Read more... )

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dragsuit062 January 3 2011, 02:15:46 UTC

flawless. loved every moment of this.

shinara66 January 3 2011, 02:27:16 UTC

Nice job. I loved the intensity of their interaction. It's obvious Callie still loves Arizona, but is unsure of what that means. It looks, to me, like Arizona is trying to keep her distance and allow Callie to be happy(or what she thinks is happiness...lol)

Can't wait for the next part!

missn_hahn January 3 2011, 04:13:58 UTC

This was great! Didn't you write an AU fic with Erica meeting another woman named Lisa? Any chance you'll be continuing that? Hope you continue this -- I really liked it.

silver222 January 3 2011, 04:15:08 UTC

This was heartbreaking but such an amazing read. I could feel the gut wrenching emotions of both characters and it seemed so true to who they are. Using the anniversary of Arizona's brother's death, Callie still wanting to comfort and be there for Arizona even when they're not together, and Arizona ultimately trying to mask her feelings and be her own good man in a storm - all so very good.

Loved this, thank you for sharing!

walking_weapon January 3 2011, 04:44:39 UTC

that was...gah...and by that I mean beautiful and heart wrenching and perfect. can't wait for more.