Nanowrimo, day 1

[officersun524]

As part of Chuck Wendig's blog "terrible minds", I'm posting today's 1568 words. This is part of a novel in progress and kind of took me by surprise. This is chapter introduces a new character I hadn't planned on inventing...

Comments

[nymeria_55]

Great segment! I like how it adds this new character that could go either way as far as Liz's troubles and/or distractions are concerned.

For some reason - or maybe because I'm watching season 2 of Perception these weeks, I kept picturing Bloom with the face of the actor who plays the district attorney and ex-husband of the FBI agent (http://www.imdb.com/name/nm0937930/?ref_=ttfc_fc_cl_t6).

Oh, and I laughed when I saw the part where you described the mob as a zombie horde... Maybe I watch too much television... :-)

**thumbs up** & **loud cheering**

[officersun524]

OMG! I like that actor and yes, he would be quite perfect!

I was really surprised this character showed up but, reading the Glory In Death thing, reporters showed up to piss off the MC. So...sure. He just became her ex-fiance on the spot. Serendipity!