Comments | officersun524: Slash fic, Vala/Sam, unbeta'd, "Soul Meets Body" R

officersun524

Slash fic, Vala/Sam, unbeta'd, "Soul Meets Body" R

May 22, 2007 20:36

Disclaimer: SG1characters used without permission. All characters are property of MGM

Rating: R

Summary: Post “Family Ties” Femslash, Vala/Sam. This is my first attempt at writing slash of any sort. I’m guessing it may be out of character but feedback is appreciated. Thanks to sarahjane for help.

Soul Meets Body

By officersun524

I want to live where ( Read more... )

vala, fiction, sg1 pairings, vala/sam, fanfiction

Comments 12

ladycallie May 23 2007, 05:40:41 UTC

Mhmmmmmm very nice. I'll admit that I don't know Sam's character very well, since I watch for the pretty of Ben and Claudia, but I enjoyed her here. Taistful descriptions (I'd stick with an R rating... honestly with the stuff they show on TV now, you could get by with a heavy PG-13; the romantic in me was satisfied, but the story didn't feel schmoopy.

Thank you!

officersun524 May 23 2007, 13:29:29 UTC

thanks.

scarimor May 23 2007, 19:01:22 UTC

Oh, very nicely done. There's a kind of quietness to this one - introspective and gentle.

officersun524 May 24 2007, 02:58:05 UTC

thanks for checking in. I'm glad you found that quality to it because that was my goal.

gwspeanut May 23 2007, 23:14:14 UTC

I really like it, they both need something and found it.

officersun524 May 24 2007, 02:58:41 UTC

Indeed. That was my point, finding some common ground (through sex, apparently ;) )

oh, god... thehallway May 24 2007, 00:44:55 UTC

...shoot me.

i am soooooooooo sorry. i am such a slug for not getting this back to you.

mea culpa.

but i did tell you how much i liked it. it's quiet and lovely in their encounter, and i can see it happening very naturally between them.

i like them together. and you've done them justice, two women finding something they need and want at this point in time with each other.

lovely gestures between the two of them, care and concern and consideration that i think both of them appreciate.

you did really good with this.

Re: oh, god... officersun524 May 24 2007, 02:59:30 UTC

Thanks so much. Your early feedback helped me get this finished so don't beat yourself up about it :)

miseradreamer May 24 2007, 22:51:39 UTC

I loved it :) very very nice fic! I hope there will be more.

officersun524 May 24 2007, 23:54:45 UTC

Thanks for reading--I'm glad you enjoyed it (nice icon by the way)