The End of The Beginning XX

[off_suit]

Title: The End Of The Beginning
Part: XX
Title: Pride for the prideless
Pairing: Xander/Spike (eventually)
Overall Rating: NC17
Chapter Rating: PG-13
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Comments

[brunettepet]

This was another vividly drawn chapter. Xander's been trying so hard, it's lovely to see that Spike has been paralleling the effort. Now, maybe, all three players will find a comfortable place to nest together.

[off_suit]

I always love the little snippets you leave. It's great to get an outside perspective on what other people think is going on, and how the story will progress =]. Thanks

[mofetash]

developing nicely, just as it should but obvious they are both nuts about the other

[off_suit]

*laughs* Well I think we all know that both boys can be more than a little obtuse when necessary.

[novalinx]

OK, my vote first: Continue. Forever. If you keep using Roman Numerals I'll finally learn what C and M mean :p

Another lovely chapter. I really liked that Xander made such a mature decision to move him and Dawn. I could feel how stressed/horrible that was for him. Having to admit that he needs help. Good for him.

I think Spike's reaction made it look like he'd been hoping to have them move in for a while. Why else would he need a 5 room house?! (I'm including the study as a bedroom)

The end was so cute! Although Xander is going to wake up with a wicked crink in his neck.

Thanks for sharing, happy writing, and update please soon!

Tabee :)

[off_suit]

Hell, if my muse has it's way you're going to get through C, D and M before the end of this! And I think the titles are going to get pretty long when I try and write Chapter 988 in roman numerals *g*

I wasn't so much thinking that Spike had planned it, more that Dawn had kept pushing for it, and since Spike's originally a Victorian (in the oldest sense of the word) he'd want a house resembling that... when the house isn't a crypt anyway. Though I suppose I should cover off on that huh? O.o One of the downsides to having the muse live in your head is you forget what you've written and what the muse has decided is fact and not told you about yet.

Thanks as always for a lovely comment. =]

[chaoskir]

Oh pretty pretty please let your muse continue on it's merry, slightly angsty way. This story is so wonderful. I would like to read updates of this story for the next 20 years or at least for a long, long time. Please!
This chapter was so great and I really do love your Xander and your carefully Spike. Thanks a lot for the last 20 wonderful chapter and really I think you should let your muse has it's own way with the next 250 chapter.

[off_suit]

Knowing my muse it would take another 250 chapters to get to the end of the plot line. I'm still debating, but it's becoming a rather one sided debate. My muse keeps knocking the sensible part of my brain talking about assignments and work unconscious. *g*

[bethlehem2]

Here's another vote to let the muse have her way. I've enjoyed every chapter and can't wait to see where we go next.

[off_suit]

I'm really glad you've liked it so far. Hopefully you'll keep reading if I decided to keep writing =]