win some, lose some - part two: july (1/2)

[of_hearts]

Glee. 11,897 words. Noah Puckerman; Puck/Rachel. The summer after Puck's junior year, told in three parts. In this month: Fourth of July barbeque, Mandatory Band Bonding Day, and Puck & Rachel being...Puck & Rachel. Also, analogies. (For part one, click here: JUNERated R (I guess?) for language and allusions to secksitime. Oh and I made soundtracks

Comments

[fuzzy_paint]

It seems like I have been waiting forever, and let me tell you, it was well worth the wait. WELL WORTH IT.

Moments I loved:
“I told you, dude wasn’t messing around: never touch the Jesus Hot Pocket.” LOL WHUT? Is that like the Virgin Mary grilled cheese? cause if it is I think I love you (I think I love you even if it isn't)

“Now some guys - badasses like yourself, for instance-” Puck grins and puckers his lips, nodding in approval at, well, himself. How much do I love that Bam-Bam understands the badassness of Puck? SO MUCH. Also, Puck's arrogance is AMAZING. Very well encapsulated in that one thought.

THE HARP, LOL (cue for whut face O_o It doesn't display the amazingness of my expression - somehow very much whut and very much BRB LOLing so hard I'm DYING, but it's the best I can do over the interwebs). Rachel is such a HARP. AWWW. And of course Puck doesn't get it. Boy needs to sit down and listen to Bam Bam's infinite knowledge.

“And what exactly do you think went down?” “Um, you on me, obviously.” HEE! His eloquence

[of_hearts]

Dude, I'M SO SORRY I MADE YOU WAIT FOREVER AND A DAY FOR JULY. I'm such a shit writer, god. And even moreso considering how long it's taken me to get to replying to all these amazing comments. But wtvs, moral of the story is this: yes, it's totes like the Virgin Mary grilled cheese and I love you. So hard.

Now I'm off to read your comment on part two! It goes without saying that I'm so, so, so happy you enjoyed part one!

[anonymous]

Loooooooved it! Every single bit of it: the pace, the mood, how perfectly expressive it is without being overly descriptive. Its like I can almost taste the air *Melts into gooey puddle*

I also liked the way you worked in Mark's 'Lea analogy' lol.

Now on to part two!

[of_hearts]

Glad you liked it! Thanks for taking the time to comment!

I also liked the way you worked in Mark's 'Lea analogy' lol.
Ahh, I don't know what this means! Anon come back and tell me what this means!

[anonymous]

*anon is embarrassed*

I thought...

"I think Lea and Amber sing the best in the glee club but their styles are so different, like comparing a harp and a piano!" - Mark Salling

so sorry. *hides face in shame*

[duchiekat]

omg! this has got to be the best fan-fic i've read!
- the text msgs had me lolling!
- BAM-BAM! the fact that he's the drummer . . . i get it! and his analogy of rachel being a harp; and puck calls rachel a harpy
- i love the make-out session and how ethan pried their heads apart to ask him a question and puts 'em back, 'as u were' i lol'ed in irl
- where can i get bam-bam;s peta shirt?
- i love that they hang out with college kids
- the way puck changed the music from classical to luda, 'yeah, boy' i don't know why that made me lmao
oh, gosh. u win with ur talent in writing.
more please!

[of_hearts]

Ahhh, thank you! I'm so happy you enjoyed this! Infinite apologies for replying to your comment so late-- I had a rough week, school-wise. Regardless, NGL, all the parts you mentioned were all my favorite parts to write, haha! And OMG...

where can i get bam-bam;s peta shirt?
LOL HERE

Thanks again for taking the time to comment! :)

[of_hearts]

MOLLY. I SHIT YOU NOT, I LOVE YOU MORE THAN I SHOULD CONSIDERING WE'VE ONLY KNOWN EACH OTHER FOR TWO SECONDS, LOL.

“We all need an outlet, and despite your atrocious personality, there are actually moments when you’re not a scourge to society.”
I think this is my favorite line out of the whole series thus far!

I'm so stupidly happy you are enjoying this, dude. NOW I HAVE TO GO READ YOUR SECOND COMMENT. BRB, still LOL-ing forever @ you not realizing part two was already posted.