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Their Own World

Nov 22, 2011 20:37

Title: Their Own World
Author: anorienparker
Beta: alexcat
Fandom: Firefly
Characters: Simon/Jayne
Prompt: #50; Writers Choice: Explanations for 50scenes
Word Count: 938
Rating: NC17
Summary: Jayne wonders why Simon is with him.
Warnings: None.
Disclaimer: Neither Simon nor Jayne belong to me, sadly, and no money was made from this.

( It didn't make sense. )

fandom: firefly, author: anorien, genre: fictional character slash, rating: nc-17

Comments 5

engarian November 23 2011, 02:53:30 UTC

Oh, this was just sweet. They make the perfect odd couple, but they complement each other so very well.

- Erulisse (one L)

anorienparker November 25 2011, 16:49:45 UTC

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed! I think they make the perfect odd couple too. :)

perkyandproud November 23 2011, 12:15:31 UTC

You capture their voices and their personalities so well...and you make the story work anyway! ;-)

Seriously, that was just adorable :-)

anorienparker November 25 2011, 16:50:47 UTC

This seriously made my day! :) It's so difficult to know if you've captured a personality, especially in one as unusual as Jayne's, so thank you so very much for this comment. :)

I'm glad you enjoyed!!

*squishes*

offski November 30 2011, 18:17:55 UTC

Sometimes love is all the explanation there is. I agree with perkyandproud, you capture them - and wouldn't we all like to do that? oops, sorry, got sidetracked thinking about them two of them lassoed together...where was I? Oh yes, you capture them very well, especially Jayne with all his insecurities.