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odette_river

is this seat taken? - Ballykissangel fanfiction

Jun 30, 2008 21:46

Title: is that seat taken?
Fandom: Ballykissangel
Rating: PG
Word Count: 948
Summary: It’s taken three years for the pain to subside to a dull ache. He counts his blessings and doesn’t go back.

( i want to give you something i’ve been wanting to give to you for years-my heart )

fanfiction: ballykissangel

Comments 7

dear_prudence July 1 2008, 02:40:17 UTC

beautiful!

odette_river July 1 2008, 19:13:35 UTC

Thank you! :)

neverseenthesky July 1 2008, 20:05:24 UTC

God, I love this.
Beautiful.

odette_river July 3 2008, 20:59:44 UTC

Thank you very much.

thisiszircon July 2 2008, 00:59:16 UTC

Very nicely done indeed. The stylistic choices work well for you, with the alternating perspective guiding the reader through the timeframes. Thanks for the read. :)

odette_river July 3 2008, 21:00:19 UTC

I'm glad it worked. I was a little afraid of the way I played around with time here. Thanks for reading! :)

anonymous July 5 2008, 04:59:41 UTC

lovely! wonderful structure and writing style- simple on the surface yet intrinsically complex. very enjoyable though bittersweet