Comments | odette_river: It's a maze, this garden

odette_river

It's a maze, this garden - Crane/Rosethorn

Mar 02, 2008 15:26

Title: It's a maze, this garden
Fandom: Emelan
Claim: Crane/Rosethorn
Rating: R-ish
Word Count: 1338
Summary: She slams the door shut leaving him outside, which doesn’t work very well, because there are no locks.
made for the challenge at 1sentence

( a girl at work in her garden grew to love me )

fanfiction: circle of magic

Comments 11

last_archangel March 2 2008, 21:08:25 UTC

My goodness, I forgot about this fandom. I used to be obsessed with Pierce (although I'm more into Tortall than Emelan), so I completely forgot this was a TP universe until I was almost done reading the piece! I feel very silly now.

Lovely work!

odette_river March 2 2008, 21:37:04 UTC

Haha, but you've figured it out now, which is all that matters. ♥
And thank you!

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odette_river March 2 2008, 23:23:54 UTC

It was...I thought I said that in the post but obviously not. *rolls eyes* I'll edit that in.

And I love my mood theme so much. It's here, if you want to download it. :)

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odette_river March 2 2008, 23:28:06 UTC

No, you totally didn't. I just added it. :)

antistar_e March 3 2008, 00:32:49 UTC

I haven't read these books, but I can still admire how you crafted each sentence; you have a gorgeous turn of phrase. These were fabulous :)

odette_river March 3 2008, 00:55:37 UTC

Thank you very much. :)

starbookworm March 23 2008, 17:58:09 UTC

I loved Secret Garden and Circle of Magic, so it was a real joy to read this! Will you be doing anything more with the Secret Garden theme?

odette_river March 23 2008, 19:50:02 UTC

Well, it wasn't intended to have much of a Secret Garden theme, but now that you mention it, I see it. :) I guess it has to do with the fact that Rosethorn has a lot to do with gardens. (Heh, heh.) So, if the mood strikes me, maybe.

agentlerain April 1 2008, 15:07:01 UTC

I love this. I don't read many TP fics, but well-written stuff like this makes me regret I haven't dug in yet. Thanks for the beauty of Rosethorn. I think you've really captured her.

Just something, is #3. supposed to be mug noble or smug noble? =P It's the only little mistake that stuck out for me.

#38 is my favourite. Because what Crane said makes me feel like he's already detached from her in wondering, and while they share that moment, we all know that it's different in the future, almost as if his thoughts and later actions severed them.

#49 makes me chuckle.

Thanks so much!