FFIC: Redundant: WIP chapter 34 (the real one)

[oddlittleturtle]

WOOT! Plugging away! Not nearly enough words though. There's only 650 or so. :/

So. Public Preview! XD

Title: Redundant
Chapter: 34 - Singularity
Featured characters: Pressly, Adams, Shepard, Alenko, Williams, Liara T'Soni, Wrex, Garrus
Warnings: Have not yet checked for grammar, spelling or general FAIL errors. This is a rough draft, guys.
Synopsis:

Comments

[sinvraal]

Minor canon quibble, but I believe asari have red blood?

I love that the ship is overheating. I keep having to overcome my ingrained mental bias of "space is cold!", when in truth space isn't much of anything. ;P

[oddlittleturtle]

Red? OH NOES! Now, I am confused!!

[sinvraal]

Haha, consistency isn't their best feature, is it? It doesn't help that most of the scenes are in quite extreme lighting variations.

Maybe violet, trending toward red or blue depending on the lighting?