Peter's girlfriend Gwen leaving in a huff... aw, jealousy, I love it! I can only imagine how the battle with the Shocker went down. Obviously no contest, but I'll bet it gave the guys a chance to show off.
These letters are wonderful. They've got their own built in joke with Kitty and Piotr telling each other about what passes for them as a normal day; fantastic events that they treat so nonchalantly.
I've decided that I'm only gonna have them tell about their adventures and have little "off time" moments between them moving the plot line along. That way, the battles can remain as comical as they're told and the readers can use their imaginations.
I liked the Piotr trashing the tv set so much that he'll be doing it twice. Hope I didn't overkill it. heh
This story is so much fun to write! (And I still haven't figured out what the plot is-lol)
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These letters are wonderful. They've got their own built in joke with Kitty and Piotr telling each other about what passes for them as a normal day; fantastic events that they treat so nonchalantly.
And yet they're like pen pals. WIN! WIN! WIN!
Oh, and I loved Piotr trashing the tv set. ;)
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I've decided that I'm only gonna have them tell about their adventures and have little "off time" moments between them moving the plot line along. That way, the battles can remain as comical as they're told and the readers can use their imaginations.
I liked the Piotr trashing the tv set so much that he'll be doing it twice. Hope I didn't overkill it. heh
This story is so much fun to write! (And I still haven't figured out what the plot is-lol)
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