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oddegg

Fic: (for the very) First Time

Sep 21, 2010 22:14

Title: (for the very) First Time
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Mention of past underage sexual encounters that could be triggery. Quite a bit of sex. And because it’s Puck nearly every other word is the ‘F’ one so there’s a LOT of swearing.
Pairing(s): Puck/Kurt, other background Gleek pairings, past Puck/many others.
Genre: Let’s call it ‘Drama’ shall we? ( Read more... )

slash, fandom: glee, pairing: puck/kurt, fic

Comments 2

lezi September 25 2010, 14:51:30 UTC

This was part one, and yet there was so much motherfucking win. I'm both terrified and excited to see if (how) the awesome continues.

So... I really love your Puck-voice. It's canon and hilarious. I loved Puck's interested but platonic/vaguely respectable assessment of the Gleek girls' bathing suits, because even if he's an ass-man now (Kurt-exclusive), the Puckasaurus will never stop ogling. :P

I thought Puck's description of Britt ("Brittany honestly thinks that fireflies are made out of moonlight, and that she believes her cat can understand what she says, and that she’ll sit through ‘Saw’ without blinking an eye but she cries like a baby when she watches ‘Toy Story’ and that she’s one of the kindest people he’s met in his life. And he knows that she doesn’t even see him right now because she’s looking at the girl sat next to him like Santana is the first, last and best thing she’s ever known") was so motherfucking gorgeous! It was just so... uncharacteristically sweet of Puck, and yet I could totally see it as Puck being canon. ( ... )

oddegg September 25 2010, 22:51:00 UTC

Good holy god! Wow, sweetie - this is a comment and a half! :D SOOOO pleased you're enjoying it so far \o/

Really happy you think I got Puck's voice down ok - and yeah, he's still the Man and he's still got eyes so how's he *not* going to look when it's waved in his face wearing a bikini? ;) (but he knows he's Kurt's!)

I think Puck can be sweet - he just hides it well! And Brittany kinda brings that side out of folk anyway.

And I'm hugging myself in glee that you picked out the 'shame' line because I loved that so much myself! ♥

"Tina looks interested." And Lys looks amused.It is now COMPLETE canon in my head that Tina is a slash fangirl. I accept no other reality :D ( ... )