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Forget Me Not Chapter 11/?

May 22, 2011 12:00

Title: Forget Me Not
Author: Bunny
Rating: T
Disclaimer: Nope, not at all mine.

Summary: Set around Shadowboxing; Claire discovers an amnesiac Sylar wandering around and takes it upon herself to help him.

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fanfic, sylar, heroes, claire bennet

Comments 8

eternal_moonie May 22 2011, 17:09:33 UTC

WOOHOO!!!!

A new chapter!!!

I absolutely LOVE this!!

Keeup the great work hon!

oddbunny_dreams June 19 2011, 03:32:14 UTC

And another! Gotta say, I love seeing what your icon will be every time you review, then guess where it comes from. It's the simple things in life really. :) Cheers!

means2bhuman May 31 2011, 08:43:23 UTC

So glad you're not dead! Ha ( ... )

oddbunny_dreams June 19 2011, 03:56:04 UTC

Super play by play review! It's like freakin' Christmas! Woo hoo!

I was sad Tracy wasn't used the last season much, she was so snarky it was fun. I didn't even notice the similarities of Claire and Sylar being in the same awkward Petrelli family situation until you said something. Hooray for accidents! I do agree Emma was kinda boring on the show, but I still adored her. Hey, with the power of fanfics anyone can make her super cool. :)

means2bhuman May 31 2011, 08:46:32 UTC

Without even asking Claire knew who his lead related to.--Double owch. I wonder if he murdered the politician he's impersonating ( ... )

oddbunny_dreams June 19 2011, 04:08:20 UTC

Super play by play review Xs 2! It's like my freakin' birthday! :P

Yeah in my mind Sylar killed the politician, wasn't sure if I made that obvious, but if not it's kinda the readers choice. Yup, you're right, he's not going to know for quite awhile about the pregnancy/kid. Cuz that angst ship will be fun to sail! I do love Angela so I try to use her any time I can. And perhaps the baby has something to do with the lack of powers...

Your Claire with heights/parachute comment nearly made me spit out my drink all over my computer. So true! And finally a little cocky/proud Peter is always fun, get him away from the constant burden side of him. :) Thanks so much for these!

revdorothyl June 3 2011, 02:16:11 UTC

I'm so delighted that you've come back to this story! And I'm mad at myself for not having seen the latest chapter until now.

Anyway, you did wonderful work on this, and I can't wait to see what happens next. It certainly seems as though Claire's 'wishing' for both Sylar and Peter to be safe was responsible for the strange "your offensive powers can't affect me" field surrounding the two men, and I can't help wondering if Claire's 1-month-along-but-developed-like-a-2-month-pregnancy baby might have had something to do with it. Of course, how could the offspring of Sylar and Claire NOT have powers, and the kid certainly seems determined to be precocious in a number of ways.

I'll watch more carefully for future updates, and hope that you're inspired to post another chapter soon.

oddbunny_dreams June 19 2011, 04:17:55 UTC

Oh it's alright! Heaven knows that I've had a lot of stuff blow past me the past couple of months, pretty sure there's still some of it I haven't caught. :) Perhaps Claire's 1-month-along-but-developed-like-a-2-month-pregnancy baby had a bit of a hand in this chapter. Like you said, it's kind of impossible for the child of Sylar and Claire to not have powers. Thanks so much!