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Forget Me Not Chapter 10/?

Jan 29, 2011 22:54

Title: Forget Me Not
Author: Bunny
Rating: T
Disclaimer: With the exception of my dear Sweetie; none of them are mine. *darn!*

Summary: Set around Shadowboxing; Claire discovers an amnesiac Sylar wandering around and takes it upon herself to help him.

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fanfic, sylar, heroes, claire bennet

Comments 10

eternal_moonie January 30 2011, 05:26:26 UTC

WOOHOO!!!! Another AWESOME new chapter! *Hugs*

oddbunny_dreams May 22 2011, 17:07:35 UTC

Thank you so much! :)

revdorothyl January 30 2011, 05:55:02 UTC

I'd suspected Claire might be pregnant, but the bit with Emma seeing the baby's heartbeat was a lovely surprise, and the fact that the pregnancy is apparently progressing at twice the normal speed is an intriguing twist.

So glad to see another chapter of this!

oddbunny_dreams May 22 2011, 17:11:30 UTC

Yeah, her pregnancy probably wasn't my best kept secret, but what the baby can or can't do I'm keeping mum on. :P I wanted Emma to have a cool moment and her power had this awesome potential that was never really explored. So she got to have her own little moment here.

faythbrady January 30 2011, 21:13:04 UTC

Emma being able to see the heartbeat was a cute twist and I like how she was jealous of Claire. Love this and can't wait for more

oddbunny_dreams May 22 2011, 17:13:59 UTC

I adore Emma, so I really wanted her to have a cool moment with her power, one that was kinda useful. And can you blame Emma for her confusion with Claire and Peter? Cute, younger blonde thing, no one really knows of her existence. I'm kinda surprised it didn't happen more often. :) Thanks so much!

gerriv January 31 2011, 02:35:35 UTC

Oh Wow! A baby? Well....it's really going to hit the fan now, once Sylar finds out!

oddbunny_dreams May 22 2011, 17:15:01 UTC

Oh yes, the baby is not going to make things easy at all. It's also a matter of when Sylar is going to find out... Dun dun dun! :P Thanks so much!

aikenichi11 April 14 2011, 06:58:33 UTC

Wow, talk about a twist, never would have thought about that as an aspect of her ability. That kid is going to be amazing!

oddbunny_dreams May 22 2011, 17:17:37 UTC

I'm an impatient person who didn't want to plan out 9 months, so it's so very convenient that both the kids parents have the ability of super healing! Now the question is, will the baby have an ability....? :P Thanks so much!