Fic: Never There

Dec 09, 2009 14:17

Chris stared at his cell phone sitting on the countertop, gnawing on his thumbnail. Zach said he was going to call at four, when he got home. It’s 4:30, he never calls when he says he will, Chris has come to expect this. They’re always playing phone tag with each other. Whenever they do manage to be on the phone at the same time, it’s ( Read more... )

slash, pinto, rating: pg-13, fiction

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leopardchic79 December 11 2009, 01:57:19 UTC
*sniffle*

Definitely made my heart ache, but I really liked it!

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oddballobedie December 11 2009, 02:16:02 UTC
*hands you Kleenex*

Thank you, I was hoping the heart-ache would be conveyed well. =)

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foom101 December 11 2009, 03:41:37 UTC
OMG. You must continue! This was great!

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oddballobedie December 12 2009, 08:11:48 UTC
Thank you for reading and commenting! A sequel is a definite possibility. =)

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kianspo December 11 2009, 13:23:42 UTC
So heartwrenching... Please, a sequel?

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oddballobedie December 12 2009, 08:14:28 UTC
Thanks! I'm seriously considering a sequel, although I don't know when I'll be able to get to it. =]

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