Fic: Never There

Dec 09, 2009 14:17

Chris stared at his cell phone sitting on the countertop, gnawing on his thumbnail. Zach said he was going to call at four, when he got home. It’s 4:30, he never calls when he says he will, Chris has come to expect this. They’re always playing phone tag with each other. Whenever they do manage to be on the phone at the same time, it’s ( Read more... )

slash, pinto, rating: pg-13, fiction

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oddballobedie December 10 2009, 00:10:13 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. At first I was going to have Zach be the one feeling unloved but it didn't work out so I switched and it flowed more smoothly for some reason. Again, thanks for reading and enjoying. =)

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gryffin_draco December 10 2009, 00:24:32 UTC
This. This demands a sequel. Well played.

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oddballobedie December 10 2009, 00:32:35 UTC
Thanks! =) Yeah, I left it open so I could do a sequel if the inspiration struck. Glad you liked it.

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bbuttercup December 10 2009, 01:32:44 UTC
:-(... so sad.

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oddballobedie December 10 2009, 23:34:11 UTC
Yeah, I really didn't intend to make it as sad as I did but it kind of got away from me. Thanks for reading =)

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bootson December 10 2009, 03:10:37 UTC
AW. I'm kind of an angst!whore...I'm woman enough to admit this! This was so sad and just great. I hope you do a sequel to it, even if you keep it all angsty!

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oddballobedie December 10 2009, 23:36:28 UTC
I wasn't sure if I was going to do a sequel- and I'm still not entirely- but now I have a couple ideas for one. Thanks for reading and liking.

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adafrog December 10 2009, 03:20:11 UTC
Oh, poor Chris.

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oddballobedie December 10 2009, 23:40:33 UTC
=P Yeah, poor Princess Whitelaw seems to be the abused of choice for angsty Pinto fics. Thank you for reading!

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