And Having Writ - Entry No. 4

[spikesgirl58]

Title: And Having Writ
Entry Number: 04
Author: Spikesgirl58
Fandom:  Original fiction
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Horror
Word Count:     3137

"Just who the hell does she think she is?"  Franklin Munroe shouted aloud, his voice

Comments

[ippoddity]

HOLY. MOLY. That was so creepy!!! I'm really glad I decided to read this in the morning, rather than at night, like I usually do. In the very beginning I kind of felt bad for Munroe because of his overbearing mother. But then as we got to learn more about him and how terrible he was... well, I almost feel like he got what he deserved! Great job with this! I really look forward to reading more of your work!

[spikesgirl58]

Oh, now you are making me blush! I am delighted that you enjoyed it, even better that it might have just given you pause at bedtime! Excellent!

Thank you, thank you!

[latemarch]

Oh my god! I was waiting the whole time for Munroe to get what was coming to him, hoping that she was the usual sort of serial killer one sees in Criminal Minds but this was far beyond that! So creepy - I kind of had to skim the very last part because I was afraid of the details but couldn’t stop reading. And oh the irony, his entire existence is geared toward the acquisition of money, only to never realize that his mother had so much the whole time… Wow.

[spikesgirl58]

Thank you so very much. I am always delighted when I can surprise even those who are expecting it, but aren't expecting exactly what I deliver.

Thanks for reading, even with the skimming!