Entry 02: "Wraith Passage" (PG)

[mtxref_fic]

Title: "Wraith Passage"
Entry Number: 02
Author: matrixrefugee/mtxref_fic
Fandom: Arrow/Torchwood crossover
Rating: (PG)
Genre: Drama/Sci-fi (creepiness, mild mind control/skewed perception,
Spoiler Warnings:
Word Count: 1,367

Author's Note: Closer to the superhero genre, though this features one comic book series reimaging's big bad... and another character, with what

Comments

[latemarch]

Ha ha everyone keeps choosing these fandoms where I have no idea what's going on! Either way, I liked the back and forth between the characters; I think maybe I would have expanded just a little bit how much the gases were affecting Malcolm and make him want to escape and wander, but otherwise, great!

[ippoddity]

Oh my gosh, I honestly thought they were going to be ambushed or something in the Wraith Corridor. Unless something is going to follow them out of the mist?! It just seems like they made it out of there too easily... Putting that aside, I really liked the back and forth between Malcolm and Harkness. I really liked that the emotional tension was also reflected by the tension of navigating through literally difficult to navigate space. Keep up the good work!

[mtxref_fic]

:: grins:: Glad I could keep up the suspense: It's part of an on-going series, so there might be something that crawled out of the darkness of space which I'll unleash in another tale...