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Entry o5. it's hard to dance (with the devil on your back)

Oct 05, 2013 17:05

Title: it’s hard to dance (with the devil on your back)
Entry Number: 05
Author: Callunavulgari
Fandom: Percy Jackson & the Olympians
Rating: NC-17
Genre: mythology, slice-of-life, porn-with-plot
Spoiler Warnings: Up to the Son of Neptune.
Word Count: 4648 words

( It starts because Nico starts coming home more exhausted and wrung out than usual, the smudges beneath his eyes so dark that it almost looks like he got socked in the eyes. Percy watches him stoop, face lit up by the bare bulb of the refrigerator as he roots around through all the probably expired lunch meat. Eventually he emerges, kind of victorious, with a truly sad looking carrot. )

2013, entry 05, fandom: percy jackson & the olympians

Comments 2

latemarch October 7 2013, 23:19:55 UTC

First of all, yay, Percy Jackson! I love the books and the movies so I’m glad to read some fic! I really liked how ordinary thoughts were scattered throughout and inbetween some more important moments, like when there’s a bad angle of Selma Blair on the television. (And I totally read that Hercules quote in James Woods’ voice!) It was good to see the dynamic in the relationship between Nico and Hades, how they fought and yet Hades was still a semi-typical (I use that term very loosely) father in that he got all riled up when it came to talking about his son’s sex life.

ippoddity October 10 2013, 08:08:50 UTC

Considering Hades is the ruler of the underworld and many people think that homosexuals get sent to Hell, I feel like he should be a more understanding father, haha. I love that Percy is the more nervous one though, and Nico kind of just does whatever the heck he wants. The scene where Paul walks in on them in the shower was so embarrassing it even made me blush though! As long as Hades doesn't walk in on them next time...