Story 6 - Separation Anxiety (6)

[seiyonashi]

Title: Separation Anxiety, 6 - Past Tense
Entry Number: 06
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Comments

[ippoddity]

I like how we're slowly getting to learn more about Duko and Kotetsu. Although I really can't wait to hear exactly about how Duko fought his doppelganger?

And Achtzehn-- who is this guy? Seems like he has more history with Duko than just that small flashback. And why the hell is he so mean? Beating up poor Duko unprovoked... Can't wait to see what happens next!

[seiyonashi]

Oh, thank you ^^ Well, I'll try my best to explain it at some point!

Yup, he definitely does... Thanks so much, I'm glad you're enjoying the story <3

[saraste_impi]

Achtzehn is such a bully! I'm exited to read more about his history with Duko, as the flash back and the following sequence brought about even more questions than what it answered.

[seiyonashi]

He is, haha xD I'll do my best to answer all your questions soon!! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter <3

[latemarch]

I'm liking Duko more and more, and I think that his determination to fight out his guilt and anger now that Kotetsu is gone is totally plausible, and makes the character real. The tidbits about their past relationship together are really sweet/interesting.

And if I'm understanding this correctly, Achtzehn is stronger now because his doppelganger is dead? Or because he's been picking on people for so long?

[seiyonashi]

Oh, thanks a lot ^^ That makes me feel better, I was a bit worried about him, haha!

Yes, Achtzehn is about Duko's age and therefore has already killed his double :)