Entry 05, Lights Out, Part 2

[goddessofbirth]

Title:  Lights Out, Casey vs. The Family Tree or Jayne Meets the Parents, Chapter 37, Pt 2
Author:  GoddessofBirth
Entry Number: 05
Word Count:  1186
Fandoms:  Firefly/Chuck
Genre:  Action/Drama/Angst/Smut/Fluff
Pairings:  Rayne, Jellie, Charah, Branna
Chapter Rating:  PG-13
Series Rating: M
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Disclaimer:  Don't own, don't profit

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Comments

[latemarch]

Just had to end it with a cliffhanger... This is the second entry today that I've read like that! What's with people! =D

Anyway, whoa, what an intense situation! That is definitely not someplace I'd like to be. I did appreciate that I got a very clear picture of Shaw as a villain - polite and dainty, which is interesting, and I think those qualities almost make any villain even more...evil.

And just as a note, you forgot the word count for this entry - nothing big - but just so you know, for the community total, I did take the word count down as 1186 words.

[goddessofbirth]

LOL...well, it's not intentionally a cliff hanger - or at least when the whole chapters completed, it won't be (ah, who am I kidding - I have a TERRIBLE habit of ending on cliffies!)

Glad you enjoyed it - Shaw is somewhat of a unique baddie, the All American Hero who went bad when he realized his government betrayed him. He went dark, quite thoroughly.

Oops! Sorry about the word count neglect. I did it; apparently just didn't remember to actually write it down. I edited to fix it:)

[ippoddity]

Man, Shaw is just brutal! Even though the odds are more even now that he sent off a few of his goons, it still seems like a pretty dire situation for Jayne and Co. But I know a great showdown is coming up soon, because the gang is all gathered!