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Entry 01, Key of A Minor

Oct 08, 2011 02:24

Title: Key of A Minor
Entry Number: 01
Author: ienablu
Fandom: Supernatural
Rating: PG13
Genre: general
Spoiler / Warnings: none / scarification
Word Count: 1013

( Jesse tries to keep his power in check. Claire helps. )

fandom: supernatural, 1, 2011

Comments 3

goddessofbirth October 9 2011, 15:37:58 UTC

Oh...nice and disturbing...just like SPN;)

ippoddity October 9 2011, 21:59:04 UTC

Wow, what a completely disturbing image. At the same time, I think you definitely captured the darker side of SPN. You completely caught me off guard by starting the story off with Claire coming back from a vampire hunt. I thought that perhaps exterminating the nest was so easy because there was something more to it! But instead the story took a much different turn. Keep up the good work for OWC!

latemarch November 3 2011, 18:23:00 UTC

Wow - this was definitely intense! I liked Jesse's determination to control himself by any means necessary, and I thought the ending of the entry was great - if Claire had sat down and tried to think about anything, or fuss of Jesse, it would have been ruined. They way she just walks off to take a shower makes it perfect.