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Entry 06, The Conversation

Oct 08, 2011 00:06

Title: The Conversation
Entry Number: 06
Author: dtsguru
Fandom: original
Rating: PG-13 (for some language)
Genre: urban fantasy
Spoiler Warnings: none
Word Count: 1766

This is set in ‘The Family’ ‘verse. Self beta’d so all mistakes most definitely are mine.

( Entry 06 )

original, 2011, 6

Comments 7

latemarch October 8 2011, 22:51:47 UTC

I think that I'm getting far too attached to all of your characters. So know... after this challenge is over, I will cyber-stalk you for more updates. Just a heads-up. =D

For me, Joe took center stage this entry, and I was delighted. He vaguely reminds me of one of my characters, Jaimie. (Must be the 'J' thing.) The bacon part, and Joe's comment about Cass and Greg being dumbasses were the best parts. I also have a lot more sympathy for April now, or as least I understand why she left. And of course, I'm more than interested in Cass and Greg. Keep writing! You're more than half-way there, you lucky dog you!

dtsguru October 10 2011, 03:57:28 UTC

You're free to cyber-stalk me. :)

I am trying to shift the focus from one character to another, despite the fact that it's told from Cass's POV.

goddessofbirth October 9 2011, 15:33:05 UTC

I humbly submit that Greg needs to suffer aaaaa llllooooottttt more before he gets her back. Especially after that crack about her fucking her way down the interstate when she'd only had sex with one guy. He obviously still has some maturing to do...

I'm interested to learn more about April, and who is her baby-daddy...;)

Wonderfully written, of course - keep it coming!

Oh Oh! And BACON!!!!

dtsguru October 10 2011, 03:55:05 UTC

Thank ya pretty lady. :)

BACON!!!

ippoddity October 9 2011, 21:49:35 UTC

So the story is out now! It seems both Greg and Cass have been holding onto some rather "poisonous" misconceptions for the past several years. Still though, Cass still seems very bitter about her relationship with Greg, so I get the feeling there's still something more she's not saying!

dtsguru October 10 2011, 13:19:12 UTC

The broken relationship between them has been eating at them both for years. That kind of hurt isn't healed in one conversation.

saraste_impi October 17 2011, 14:53:48 UTC

I second latemarch and shall stalk you around after this challenge. This story's got me too hooked.

Nice interactions, as ever, and am falling for your characters more and more.