Title: If Given The Chance Entry Number: 04 Author: mihnn Fandom: Harry Potter Rating: PG Genre: Angst, Hurt/Comfort Spoiler Warnings: Character death. Word Count: 1981 Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5
I haven't been reading this story, but I chanced to peer at this segment because I'm always curious about character death stories. Gah, heart-breaking and beautiful. I love your method of story-telling from Draco's POV. The line about him just waiting for her to wake up was very poignant.
Him wanting a year and Hermione saying they'll have to meet at her grave is all so bittersweet and sad. I love that Hermione wants to help him move on, and that he knows he has to, somehow, even though right now he just can't.
I like Ginny being kind to him, too. It's been years since I've had anything to do with the books, but I can imagine it of her.
Aw man, must you make us read such heart-wrenching stuff?! When Draco waits for her to wake up after she’s died, the image of him standing over Hermione’s grave while others blame him… I’m in public here, I can’t be crying! I’m most hoping that the Patronus at the very beginning was Hermione’s, because the thought of a Patronus living on just for a few moments, allowing for there to be just a hint of hope for survival, is fittingly heartbreaking for this piece. And especially since Draco returns to the act of seeing Hermione after she has passed, it would make a nice cyclical theme, if I’m making any sense here. Anyway, it was a good kind of sad!
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Him wanting a year and Hermione saying they'll have to meet at her grave is all so bittersweet and sad. I love that Hermione wants to help him move on, and that he knows he has to, somehow, even though right now he just can't.
I like Ginny being kind to him, too. It's been years since I've had anything to do with the books, but I can imagine it of her.
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