[random] je concrit meme

[octavoice]

The Johnny's Fanfiction Concrit Meme
THIS is where you get to tell me about my writing.I think one of the most wonderful things about being a writer is that there's no way anybody is perfect at it, and there's always room to improve. So take an unbiased stance and raise some flags for me! :D I won't bite back

Comments

[katmillia]

The thing that always strikes me the most about your writing is the almost delicate way you handle it- there's not really a better way to describe this, but it feels like every word is chosen with this tender care and meant to be there. Does that make any sense at all? It's like... hmm. It's like nothing in your fics ever feels like it's just shoved in there or out of place; every sentence works with the sentence before it and after it to create a bigger picture. I always notice things like this because sometimes when people get into the editing process (I'm guilty of this), they focus too much on editing sentences one by one instead of looking at them all as a whole and seeing how they work with those around them. And your writing has always just been able to do this and make it seem so easy, and I really admire that