[Fic] Run for Sasunaru exchange

[octavius_x]

For: sn_exchange
Title: Run
Rating: NC-17 for sexuality
Summary: Sasuke & Naruto run from Kumo to Ame. Complications and Adulthood ensue.
A/N: Hope you like! The photo in this story has been digitally altered by the author.

Betrayals during war are childlike compared with our betrayals during peace. New lovers are nervous and tender, but smash everything.

Comments

[rosalui]

LOVE LOVE LOVE! *re-reads*

[octavius_x]

:D I'm so glad, it was different from the others so I hoped it would be okay <3

[erisabesu]

Oh my gosh, what an outstanding piece! *__* There's this kind of quiet but intense feeling held in suspense through all their words and actions that really comes through here, and I was completely sucked into the situations from the get-go. I love the parallels between the men in the past who chose duty to the village over love, and it completely makes sense that Naruto would pick Sasuke. <333 The image of Sasuke as the beating heart within Susano'O is going to stay with me. *__* Your whole piece is thought provoking. Excellent job. :3

[octavius_x]

I tried to think about the great difference between Hashirama and Naruto, since we have the endless comparison between Madara and Sasuke--for Naruto being the village head and saving sasuke have to do with the same thing. And the thing is we all know Naruto would give up his dream if it meant saving Sasuke, we know without a doubt. I would have liked to write them running more, but I really wanted a unromatic reconciliation somewhere sort of horrible where it would really be on them as individuals to work it out instead of everything else interfering.

That part with Sasuke and Sasusano'O is my favorite to <3 Thank you so much for reading!