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octavius_x

That Machiavellian Streak

Apr 19, 2009 20:30

Various drabbles written for the ever-lovely myrafur. The first two were for her birthday, the second two were done online.

( Katekyo Hitman Reborn, It's his birthday, the Vongola Boss reflects. Sawada Tsunayoshi/Guardians... R )

remus/sirius, drabbles, katekyo hitman reborn!, fiction, naruto, sasunaru, harry potter

Comments 17

imochan May 9 2009, 21:08:42 UTC

Um, dude - that last drabble was awesome. You flip sentences and carve out scenes like a goddamned pro.

Also It was true they were no good, Sirius had taken to not brushing his hair and wearing a leather jacket covered in bright badges.

UGH, KINK. YES, PLZ. ♥

Well done, well done, you!

octavius_x May 9 2009, 21:53:57 UTC

Hahaha omggg I can't believe you left me a comment <3

This totally made my uber-boring day in the library. I'm kind of embarrassed since everything I want to say is gushy and top-heavy with flattery, but I will admit to spending altogether too much time in your memories section being flustered by the fact I couldn't replicate any drabbles of the same quality. So--so really, full-circle and all that, AND THANK YOU :D

S/R KINK FTW

shufflelock October 21 2010, 09:10:29 UTC

i remember reading the naruto drabble and the last hp drabble a few months ago and i could not stop thinking about them afterwards. now that i've found you again i need to gush about them because i have always regret not doing so.

the whole set up for the naruto one is so sweet and sad and nostalgic and childlike that i feel weak-kneed from it's start. but those last lines--ooooh those last lines. scar tissue over the heart and broken hands and cradling and knots and seriously your word choice is impeccable because this hurt in all the right ways and it's nothing more than a handful of words. i am honestly struck by the image of naruto sitting on that hospital bed with iruka looking helplessly at him as he holds that hitai-ate and stares at that knot just unffff your writing ( ... )

octavius_x October 24 2010, 09:51:39 UTC

I got this comment on the end of a horrible school day and it really cheered me up. Thank you so much for taking the time to come back and leave a note like this, make me blush.

Word choice! I do try to think about what I'm doing when I choose adj, verbs etc. how it works altogether and it's always nice to know the practice paid off. The naruto and HP ones are also favorites of mine, and I'm so flattered they made an impression on you. There are a few other HP and naruto drabbles floating around here and some Naruto fics if you're into those. Feel free to poke around :D

Thanks again!